• Member Since 18th Jun, 2012
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Kaii-Leiko


A simple brony who loves writing and one day hopes to make a career of it. Loves anime, MLP, reading and Writing. Loves making new friends as well, if anyone wants to add me to Skype just contact me.

Comments ( 19 )

Adorable. Simply adorable :twilightsmile:

Noticed a few errors here and there, but meh. It's the holidays right? We're all allowed a few mess-ups :ajsmug:

Adorable. Simply adorable :twilightsmile:

Noticed a few errors here and there, but meh. It's the holidays right? We're all allowed a few mess-ups :ajsmug:

Aw, is so adowable.
Please write more Twishy, you've got a knack for it, old boy. Or girl. Not really sure.

So adorable... I loved it.
:twilightsmile::heart::yay:

It's just so cute that I think you gave me diabetes.

Thank you for this awesome twishy story. I hope you will do more in the future. Greetings :twilightsmile:

That was adorable! There were a couple errors hanging around, but there weren't too many.

"...You have a really nice, um, backside.”

Win. Just...win. :rainbowkiss:
Thumbs up and a favorite. :yay:

1848117

Thanks! I'm trying to work on all those errors that creep up. Every fic I write I improve though. ^^

1848880

I am a boy, and thank you! Twishy is my favourite ship and I write mainly them. I'm glad you enjoyed.

1849298

Hehe, thanks. Glad you did.
1849604
Oh my. I'm sorry. Glad you enjoyed the story though.

1850001

Thanks! And yes, there will definitely be more stories about Twishy to come.

1850392

Thanks! Yeah, I guess I missed a few, unfortunately. I'm glad you liked that xD. I struggled a lot with putting that in or not and in the end I decided to. I see it was a good decision.

1851023

Twishy is definitely best ship, looking forward to more!

REJECTED!!!!!:rainbowwild: Poor Twilight, but sex has to be meaningful and honest, not rushed. You did a very, very good job on this, though you do have errors that eally need to be corrected, and I think you mean on the other hoof rather then hand. Other then that I very much enjoyed it, it was sweet, gentle and loving, onto the next story for me:twilightsmile: This is a really great pairing.:yay:

2112487

Awww, Fluttershy didn't do it to make Twilight feel rejected. I'm actually thinking of coming back to this one and editing, correcting it. I feel like I've improved quite a bit since having written this.

2112694 I understand:twilightsmile: And that sounds like a good idea, you done real well on this, I'm reading your other TwiShy fics now, hope you like my own:yay:

2112708

I'm actually at work right now but I'll definitely give them a read when I get home. :twilightsmile:

2112717 Understood bro, I need a job myself and am looking hard now:twilightsmile: Thank you very much, that means a lot to me:yay:

I definitely love TwiShy shipping, and I believe this story really captures the characters personality and emotions. I give you :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: out of 5

Not bad, not bad at all. I was really impressed, other then making sure to change hand to hoof, I rather very much enjoyed it. You done good bro, you done good:ajsmug:

This was a nice story, quite a few spelling errors, but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

:yay: :heart: :twilightsmile:
Good job i approve (not that my approval means anything)
~Tobben

I'm still grinning. That's a good sign, I suppose. :twilightsheepish: As someone already pointed out, you missed some letters here and there. It made me grin even wider, seemed like you were to eager to continue writing... :rainbowlaugh:
It was a sweet an funny story. I still haven't decided what to think about TwiShy, but this one was a step towards 'could be possible and cute', I guess. Nice work.

Thank you.

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