Equestria has fallen.
The Elements of Harmony are powerless, and Chrysalis rules over Equestria, holding the princesses as her own.
Shade, the son of the princess is dead, murdered by the evil changeling.
And as Fluttershy toils as Chrysalis's slave, she thinks that all hope is forever gone for her country.
But just when everything has hit the lowest point, a glimmer of hope is found...
First book is here: Son of the Princess
Second book is here: Son of Chaos
Alternate ending to Son of Chaos: Son of Peace
Third book is here: Son of Change
Alternate ending to Son of Change: Son of Death
Weh i though you gonna make some rebelion story but anyway gonna read it
You are a BUCKIN TROLL.
Know that I have said that, i am laughing at myself while typing this.
Good work, my faith in you has been restored, and i am already falling in love with this story.
YEAHS. YOUR SWAG HAS BEEN RESTORED.
Sonuva... Best 'ing EVAR! I can see a bit of sun peeking past the clouds!
YES! OH GOD YES !!!
You are such a troll and we all fell for it
You are brilliant
Can't wait for next chapter
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On a side note. I WAS RIGHT. For the first time in this series my prediction was right
I was right. Misty will betray her mother and switch sides.
2028599 Her mother used the shit out of her. I would have done the same.
>"Shade"
>princess's son
>these comments
Damn son.
Wow you made biggest bitch of Chrysalis ever :P
Andddddddddddddd just like that Misty is a likeable character
2030552 It was either that or making her unredeemable as all hell.
2024024
Well then. I'll make sure that never happens again. (And what was your prediction?)
Great chapter. save flutters for Le Resistance Misty
2030583, ok my prediction wasn't fully correct... actually after reading this chapter it is mostly wrong
I thought shade would heal by absorbing the raw emotion coming from flutters
but I was wrong yet again and I love you for that
Oh man, reading these comments is just too priceless. I'm loving this series. And it's even better knowing that I'm helping throw everyone off!
Good job on the recap, btw. I think you pretty much nailed it. The flow was good, the pacing was fine, and I wasn't bored at all while reading it, despite knowing the whole story already. Zecora was about a B+, but that's not bad at all. Rhymes aren't easy.
Don't need the K.
Oh, and good work, as always
Cue the mission impossible music,
I finally read it!!
Great, amazing. now lets save flutters, she is missing her shadey
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I like him; he wrote "Octavarium" and "The Social Experiment/ Variables"
Good choice, Twow
2317015 Go tell him that. He's the reason this series is as good as it is.
My apolgies but I feel I must criticize. I really do understand the idea of showing the suffering of a character from physical and psychological torment and that was done here quite well. But in my mind someone abusing someone like this is (all morality aside) unneccesary and frankly quite boring because the villain becomes so 1-dimensional. There's no real rhyme or reason to it, just evil for the sake of evil and that makes it feel so artificial. This also irks me on a personal level because I rather like Chrysalis and it makes me feel like the character's potential is just being wasted. It's on that basis that I feel this chapter is a step in the wrong direction. Still love the entire series and this chapter isn't really that bad unless you want to be an over-opinionated ass about it, but this feels like the weakest chapter out of all of them to me.
2330714 First off, I thank you for your honesty. Not kidding with ya.
Here's the thing though. Chrysalis told Shade and Fluttershy BOTH that she was gonna break her, she told Shade when he died and Fluttershy when she saw Shade's body. There's one crucial part to her doing this that I can't say due to spoilers (and if you really MUST know send me a PM) but showing this now is going to make way for something quite interesting.
You should have chosen a better name for your fic
*sigh*
2422274 What makes you say that?
2422293
Because my fic is named Son of Eternity as well, like from the link I gave you in my last comment.
2422310 How the hell was I supposed to know?
2422328
Could have searched for it on the website... maybe perhaps change your title to The Son of Eternity since your cover art doesn't have the name already in it
2422375 Thanks, but I think I'm going to leave it how it is.
Wasn't there a different meeting between Misty and Fluttershy? Or did that one get scraped?
2516132 Got scrapped.
Little fast paced there in my opinion but epic escape was epic!
2516226 Okay lol just wanted to make sure I wasn't going crazy.......er
2517196 I take it you liked this chapter a bit more?
2517204 Yes.
Shade has returned to us!
Chrysalis, you're gonna die!!!!
There are no words.
WAIT! I've got one.
Brilliant. Absolutely fucking brilliant.
Ok enough for me I'm out. X-man mary sue ? No thank you
2702331 Come again?
2704003
Just not my type of story
2704032 Well, I'd say don't take it at face value, I always have plot twists. If you're dead set on ending it here, I'm glad you read this far.
"Sorry I took so long..."
Electricity meet Chrysalis, Chrysalis Electricity
Tho will Fluttershy ever be the same
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It took me 5 weeks that's more then a month but I have finally got around to read this ^^ So happy, So good, Want more... Please
Love the Null addition so cute... Poor Null
2822800 there are no words to exprese how good the for (or more?) part story is so far now enjoy a face rain
2922860 been waiting in anticipation for every chapter since half way through the second book I have run out of new words to describe the awesomeness. I know exactly what you mean
2922860>>2924372 You two are giving me way more credit than I deserve.
2925951 You know every time i say this book is awesome you always say that we are giving you and it to much credit. Just accept that you book and writing skills are awesome
2925951i read them all they are good im just being silly
It updated
2994282 That it did.