"It's not easy being in love." It's a common phrase you'll hear anypony in love say. But when you're an Element of Harmony, love is even harder. Why is it so hard to realise something that's been there for years? Why is it so easy for one to say what one feels to everypony but the one you love? Why is it that nothing can be 'Normal' for Applejack and Rainbow Dash?
This is the original version of the story. I was trying new stuff and writting styles, so I started with this, different parts of time/space being lived by different characters, in their own special way. But if you do not like this format, there is another version, written chronologically that you can find here.
This is my submition to the Appledash Fanfic contest of the Appledash group.
0 comments and 6 dislikes? Rage-downvoters strike again
1997248
I don't know what's worse. having 6 dislikes and no comment, or having 4 favs and thumbs up, and no comment either.
I wanna know where did I screw up, and what was so cool about my story! Somepony say something!
1997294
I haven't got the time to read it yet but I'll let you know when I did :)
It's really good! Well written! It's just...it's kinda confusing....just because of the chronological order....plus I have no clue what the games are...but still good!
1997402 I'm about to post a chronologically correct version, should be up as soon as the mods approve it. Try reading that one and see if it's clearer!
1997402 The chronological version is up!
1997948 Awesome! That helps a lot, thanks great story!
You totally mind fucked the shit out of me when I read that dash heard clopping and hearing applejack say ' oh rainbow'
2001896 Then my work here is done.
what is ɐʇpbıu?
2895847 Each chapter, a certain memory is altered, and they can't remember it or something is impeding that. that's why yhe words are changed and upside down. That one says nigdta, which is "Dating". So technically, that memory was of a certain time when they would tell their friends they were dating
2895928 ah ok
I must read them now. Also.....You've never seen Pulp Fiction? THAT MUST BE REMEDIED!
4030483
Yeah, it's on my "To Watch" list.
6980938 it's... Anachronistic, it's a weird style of writing I wanted to try out. You should try reading the other version, for a more organized, smoother read
6982308
Hehe, yeah, anachronism isn't easy, it was experimental for me
6986842 thanks!