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This is a story set some 5 years after Season 3. It covers the relationships, triumphs, and tragedies of our beloved Mane 6. As the heros of Equestria, they'll always have enemies to battle. But sometimes the hardest battles are the ones that take place within.

Cover image from here: http://from-yesterday-xx.deviantart.com/art/Cider-Drunk-284296380 - Used with permission. (this was chosen when Arc 1 was all there was to the story. I may be looking for somebrony to design some better art eventually)

Much thanks to my proofreader, Present Perfect, whose characters will appear in this story from time to time, with permission.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 30 )

Good chapter. I bet that RD was listening to Judas Priest - Riding on the Wind.

Shooting for the stars
Cruise the speed of light.
Glowin' god of Mars
Body burning bright.

Well I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind
Yes I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind.

Tearing up through life
Million miles an hour
Blinding all in sight
Surging rush of power.

Well I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind
Yes I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind.

Thunderbolt from hell
Shattering aloud.
Screamin' demons yell
Bursting through the clouds.

Well I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind
Yes I'm ridin', ridin' on the wind.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3K_12NlT_bQ

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Yea, I know this chapter took awhile. Sorry. I try to get them out ASAP, but my proofreader/editor and I are both quite busy people, I'll be sending him the rough draft of chapter four later today. Hopefully it won't be quite so much time.

246572 It's no problem really, I understand. lol

243830 NO:flutterrage: Dash would be an Ozzy fan:rainbowkiss:

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I don't reckon any Ozzy's song about high speed flying:rainbowhuh:

BTW, this RD crashed/can't be Wonderbolt/miss her tryout etc. started to be a little overused latley. I know that it's a rewrite of earlier story, one of the first about this I think(I didn't red original), I'm just talking about whole fandom.

In light of the information contained in the extensive e-mail by Amy Keating Rogers, as found here:
Amy Keating Rogers Response to Derpy Hooves
I have made a small edit to this first chapter.
In short, Amy confirmed that she had originally scripted the name Ditzy Doo, for :derpyderp1: and it was changed to Derpy as a nod to fans. In light of the subsequent controversy, and also because it was the way I had originally written this scene in this story, I have gone back to calling :derpyderp1: Ditzy Doo, using Derpy as a nickname she earned for her klutziness. Note that she is still wall-eyed in my scene and, since this is written fic, you can imagine whatever voice you want. This seems an acceptable compromise for all involved.

With Love & Tolerance,
Knight Glider

Mighty powerful to read, here come the alcoholic addiction that she'll develop.

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Shhh.... spoilers, man, spoilers. Well I guess I already spoiled it with the pic, though. :derpyderp1:

388680 and it was in description as well haha - Anyway, this is a story about how Rainbow & Pinkie's relationship is affected by a tragic event in Rainbow's life (and the way she tries to deal with it - which is hinted at in the cover image).

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Hey all, just thought everypony would like an update. I sent the first draft of Chapter 6 off to my proofreader/editor tonight, so it's (hopefully) only a week or two out from getting put on here.

Ok, full revamp done - I consolidated 8 chapters into 4 (sorry if your comments got deleted). Did a quick and dirty patch of a rather big continuity error. (Pinkie never sad? Umm... what about her whole breakdown earlier in the story? D'oh!) :derpyderp2:

Also, changed the chapter names to be old-school anime-style names, cause that's the way I roll.

Well, I don't suppose anyone's even watching this anymore, but I'm being so slow with updates that I'm officially putting it on hiatus. I do have Chapter 5 almost done, but there may be some season 3 stuff that will affect what I'm doing, so I have to wait and see.

Great chapter, glad to see this updated!
Though, how did Dash fly up to get a cloud to sleep on with her PTSD making her afraid of flying that high (and wing disabilities)? Really am enjoying this story, but don't forget about Dash's monumental list of problems haha.

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Ack! Plotholes. :facehoof:

Hmmm.... how can I hoofwave this away.

Well, the physical part of her injuries only limited her speed. Also back in Chapter 3 I did say "After a few more run-throughs, a pattern emerged. Dash did perfectly well flying at heights up to about the level of two stories."

So, umm.... I guess it was a low-drifting cloud?

Or, perhaps her mind was so crowded with worrying for Pinkie and worry about the impending gryphon war, that the fear reflex never kicked in.

Maybe I'll slap a patch on this hole in the next chapter.

2118678 Don't worry too much about it and keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:
Really low cloud though haha

this isnt good at all. i sure hope dash and pinkie get back together after saving her that is.

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Could be as simple as fog. Dashie rounded up some low flying fog and condensed the fog into a nice cloud bed.

Comment posted by Luxina deleted Dec 29th, 2013

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Well I hope that translates to a good review. I'm hoping to have some time to get back to this by February or March. I keep meaning to, but I just don't know what goes wrong. :derpyderp1:

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It was a good review and do I have to waite that long:heart:

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Thanks. :twilightsmile:
As for the wait: Chill and :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:.

You may notice my last (real) update was in February, so other folks have been waiting lots longer (if they're still waiting at all). I still have to see if my proofreader is still on board after the year-long hiatus.

Oh yes! I'm still waiting here! I don't even remember anymore when I first faved this!... I'm just marathoning through all RainbowPie fics in General of the RainbowPie group for the Nth time, rereading stories and hoping others to be completed (with little succes so far...). You're the first whom I find chapters I hadn't read yet!

Have a biscuit!

And keep them chapters comming!

Sorry, folks. Too much has changed in the show to keep this story on the rails.

Apparently I will not be posting the original, as, despite significant differences, the mod team feels it is the same story. You can find it here:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7691959/1/Rainbow-Pie

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