Hey guys! I'm glad you're still here! So I'm still and school and I have a small problem. Should I do Extra credit, or should I write another chapter? Extra Credit? CHAPTER!!!!! xP I'm actually scaring myself about how much I'm writing.... I never used to write as much as this.... Eh, who cares? Oh yeah, my grade! XD anyways, I hope you guys enjoy this chapter! I'm gonna try to make this one a little more random. Also, I kinda need a little help. Should I capitalize the I in I'm or It's? Thanks!!! By the way, did you know we got the word cereal from Demeter?...... Well.....Yeah. -Harrison
Chapter 4
Telling the Truth
Everyone in the room gasped in unison. The room went silent, and nobody said a word. Twilight was the first to speak up.
"Dash.... is this true?" she spoke with unease.
Rainbow Dash looked up at her nervously. Would..... would Twilight not like me anymore if I told her the truth? she wondered, not knowing what to do.
"I.... umm.... I don't know...." she said, looking defeated. She took a glance towards Ditzy Doo. She was looking at Rainbow Dash, looking confused. Presumably she thought that Rainbow Dash loved her, but..... was she wrong?
"Rainbow.... If you like her, then just say it. I won't hold anything against you." Twilight spoke softly.
Dash took this by surprise.
"So... you wouldn't hate me?" Rainbow Dash spoke shyly.
"Hate you? Celestia forbid I should ever hate you for liking someone! Yes, I might not be glad about your decision, but whatever your heart desires, go for it."
Dash dropped to her knees, with tears in her eyes. I've.... never felt this way before..... I don't know..... She let out a cry sadness. Everyone rushed over to Rainbow Dash.... everyone except Derpy. She still had a confused look on her face, not knowing what was going on.
"Wow.... Derpy's so cute when she's confused.... although she's always confused!" She thought to herself. They all stared at her, except Derpy, who was jumping up with joy.
"Umm.... did I say that out loud?" she asked with a blush.
"Uh... Yeah.... Kind of..." Spike laughed.
"Well, I'll just let you know that I don't mind you and Derpy being hooked up! I think you guys would look cute together."
Spike said happily.
""WHAT!?!?!?" Came a voice from behind them. Rainbow Dash behind her to see four girls standing in the doorway of the house.
There was Fluttershy, AppleJack, And Rarity... and angry ones, too.
"Well... maybe I shou've kept my mouth shut..." Spike said nervously.
"Yeah, you should've."
Author's note: Pretty cool story bro! I just finished my spanish class so I hope I don't randomly start talking in Espanol. Anyways, this was meant to be a cliffhanger/filler, so it's not long. The next one will hopefully be longer. Anyways..... ADIOS!(oh shit! XD)
164600 Yeah I know. I just wrote the next chapter, but it was really short! XD But don't worry, I'm gonna try to make this next one a lot longer (Im gonna attempt to break 3,000) Thanks for your support! And yes, Derpy is always so damn cute! :P
Uhhhh, Why are the chapter a couple hundred words long? Cmon man, are you even trying?
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
164697 Yeah. Im really sorry about that. I kinda got a little out of hand. XD don't worry, the next chapter should be about 2-3,000 words long. It'll probably be uploaded in a few hours, because soon I have a pep assembly. I have to leave 6th hour because i'm the quint player (Drummer). So after about 4 hours, maybe? Thank you for reviewing. =]
164691 Yeah. I think I was trying too hard. XD
Short sweet chapters that end with cliffhangers, great way to keep readers.
Of course a nice long chapter is nice to read as well. And I'm working on one of those long ones now.
I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but I will wait and look forward to whenever you post it.
164728 Thanks! It sure is! It's readers like you that make me want to write! I should really get working on my school work, but it's just.... Wierd! I just don't want to stop writing! :P
OMG ! x ? I never thought of that before!
Heya, Nuka here, I TOLD you I'd comment on your story! :D. Well lets start off, I like the concept of the story, but to be completely honest I think you picked the wrong pony for it. Whenever I think of love, and Rainbow Dash, the first thing that USUALLY comes to mind is Heartbreaker. I find it hard to believe that Rainbow would be in these situations myself. Second, when I first read it, (On my phone so I couldn't comment hehe, and not sure if these errors are still here) I saw the thing that bugs be the most, the non-capitalized "i". But BESIDES that, I really do like the idea you're going with, and I'm glad that your story is being so successful so far! (I So Jelly )
ANYWAYS, see ya, and hope to hear more from you soon! :D
Lol yeah. To the 2 people above me, I'm gonna tell you something. I've never heard of a Derpy x Rainbow dash couple either! But there there's something you guys should know. There's a moral to this story. Even the most unloved can find true love. It doesn't matter if your spike and celestia or luna and a rock (lol) just because you people don't look like they can go together, sometimes they do. Think about it. The almighty rainbow dash falls in love with derpy. ... you'd think that wouldn't happen in a million years! But anythings possible. Love isn't for popularity, its for.... well, love! :) and thabks nuka! :)
Sorry bout the guest sign. I wasnt by my computer so I had to use my phone.
The fic "Lazy Eye" was my first derpy dash fic. U should check it out!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I completely agree with that statement, Harrison, which is why I love Spike/Twilight pairings so much (also because I believe that nothing is stronger then two best friends who fall for one another) but I really enjoy this pair, many think it's impossible, but I say that love knows no bounds!!!!! Go Derpy/Rainbow.
In the story you Twi' said "Someone" and not "Somepony."