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Nice.

Is this story to be based totally upon this time period or will it switch to celestias afterwords? And will regular space marines be joining in on this fight?

2351723

No Ultrasmurfs. Blud Rehevens! Indrick Boreale!

I like it so far.

It will switch to "present" in future chapters, which I warn may take some time. School and such. The spess merheens might make an appearance, but I will have to make some choices. No bludd rehvenz or ultra mummies, maybe Salamanders. And if you want a story with a happy ending, you're rather lost.

Alright, let's see where this goes.

Needs more Daemon Prince

little did they know tezeench was there,but going by the name "discord"

MALAL MALAL! O GOD THE NERD BONER RIGHT NOW! GLORY TO THE RENEGADE GOD! GLORY TO THE SONS OF MALICE!

2611993 yeah, nobody gives him any cred, so I decided to throw him a bone. (Pony femur)

2351776 Oh please, the Dark Angels are best sphess mereene chapter :rainbowwild:

Why doesn't Tzeentch manipulate Celestia to become a heretic.

2729920 Her will is too strong for that, she can be weakened, but it will take something more than Tzeench's work to turn her.

MORE BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! :pinkiecrazy:

six-pointed star

Is that supposed to be the Chaos Star?

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That thing?

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Or that?

And as Khorne laughs at the bloodshed, an ancient evil wakes and begins to emerge. An evil with more lustfor blood then the Berserkers og Khorne. The ancient and terrible Necrontyr. They bathed the forces of Chaosin green lightning, stripping their armor from their flesh, and their flesh from their muscle. Terrible Immortals marching ahead, towering over the Marines of Chaos, Warriors takinh the most damage for their larger brethren. Nurgle cries, Slaanesh faints, Tzeentch had no knowledge and sits stunned, Khorne rages. But the Necrons do not stop there, they destroy the shrines and chaotic buildings, insulting the Dark Gods. Then, they return to their tombs...



To dance.

2979407 ooooookay? Not exactly what I had in mind...

2980763 I don't even know what I wrote.

2979335 sorry about that, I meant to have it as the eight pointed star of chaos undivided, but I mucked it up a little. I'll fix it when time is available.

Every time a new person speaks, try putting it in a new paragraph, mate. Looks much nicer, and is proper like that.

having to pause every few moments to sacrifice a captured pony the shade was given dome time to think between offerings.

That sentence is hard to comprehend at first. But given enough time and thought, it makes some sense.

thefeel

Space it, and all will be calm in the earth.

Suddenly Necrons. Kidding.

I really hope there won't be overpowered Alicorn junk in this fanfic

I know nothing about the Warhammer universe but still, this is fucking hilarious.

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