It's not the grammar, the spelling, or even reader friendlyness that makes a story great. Sure, Thats what makes it good but, It's what the wrighter can bring to light that makes it great.
“A wise person learns from his mistakes, but a wiser one learns from the mistakes of others.” ― Dan Desmarques
I am a fanfic critic i will give your work a number from 1 to 200. But i will only mark your work if you have more then 10 fanfic storys
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