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This story is a sequel to Lyra's Big Idea


It was the day all three of them had been looking forward to their entire lives, the fateful day when their cutie marks would finally appear. And one day, during the summer hiatus, that day finally arrived for one of them. Would this occasion be the celebration they were hoping for? Or would it be the beginning of the end?

The fourth story of my "Tales From Behind the Scenes" series. Read the other stories here:
1. The Best Night Ever (repeat)
2. Magical Mystery Drama
3. Lyra's Big Idea
4. The Crusader Crisis

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

Great story. :pinkiesmile:
More eh?
I'll be watching you :raritywink:

I'm watching you too and look forward to more.

Good story, but way too much fourth wall breaking.

Y'know, its going to be funny if Sweetie does get her cutie mark this season.

Awww! Poor Scootaloo! That kinda thing had happened to me before (I created an awesome story club, and I was the first one to make a complete story. My friend got mad and my other friend was in Scootaloo's position. In other words, they kicked me out of my own club.) And I completely feel her pain...

Friends drift apart. It happens.

As meta as all your other stories have been, this story is slowly looking out to be the one that takes the cake. You've really done well with the conflict here, the inevitability that at least one of those fillies will earn their cutie mark once they find out the one true thing that makes them unique.

Bonus points that the filly with the cutie mark turns out to be Sweetie Belle. Personally I think out of all three, hers is so obvious it isn't funny.:pinkiehappy:

And also that it means that this could potentially be something that is cannon to the show---how would Apple Bloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetie Belle react to the idea that one of them will get their respective cutie mark before the others? Would they become like D.T. and Silver Spoon in the show once once that pony is no longer considered a "blank flank"?

...Ouch. :pinkiesad2:

Another good one from you; I can't wait to see where this goes!

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Yeap; ..... pretty much dead .....

:raritycry:

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Or is it? :raritywink:

#hiatusover
#timetogetbacktowork

Great.... Sweetie has become Diamond Tiara.

Great. Now I hate them both

Is this story Dead? Because I really like this series.

Also, screw Apple Bloom, she's being an antagonistic, apathetic bitch about this, and screw Sweetie Belle, she's letting her ego take over and egging Apple Bloom on. Honestly, the only one I have any sympathy for is Scootaloo, as she seems to be the one most impacted by the proceedings.

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It's not dead. I just had a real life induced hiatus that took me away from this story for a while. I'll get this done!

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Is this the last installment, or do you plan on continuing this series?

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They'll be more coming soon. :raritywink:

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Good, because I think you definitely have some more stuff to work with, especially since the Crusaders now have their canonical cutie marks...not to mention the new Friendship castle, as well as Starlight Glimmer getting on the show.

Come to think of it, definitely the one that would be based on the two-parter 'Twilight's Kingdom' would be ideal for the next installment of your series.

Updates are Magic!

I love these stories, and this one is shaping up to be my favorite of the bunch.

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Purty much the whole point, pardner.

This story is wonderful. I'm a bit worried there won't be any updates anymore. Has been 3 years since the last chapter got out.

I wish you would update this.

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