A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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I would have payed BIG bucks to see James put Celestia in her place
Gotta say again, this story's friggin' awesome in my opinion I can't wait for more
This is the first anthromorphic story i have ever read, and i love it.
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It was one that I was worried that would get such bad reviews that I would have to cancel it. I have been happy with the turn out.
nice... the princess needs to be shown a little bit of her own medicine some times XD
3414833 LAWL
... I question the effectiveness of writing for achievements. Woo! High score!
Jesus Cryst, people really show their discomfort for the celestial princess throughout the comments. I for one, think that James is reacting horribly to authority. He sees himself as more than the damn leader of a nation just because he only took orders from two people and Celestia is not one of them, so he has to go and disrespect and ASSAULT A MONARCH. The penalty for that is commonly death or exile, yet Celestia lets him stay in Equestria and yet he continues to bad mouth her.
I just read a little more and saw this:
How the HELL did he not think that all the princess WHO MOVES THE SUN had to do to get rid of him, was a FLICK OF A HORN.
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Peasant or monarch. They bleed all the same
Something exiting gonna happen soon? Now its all like: Buck all the ponies!!!
SLAP CELESTIA AGAIN!!!
I want a drawing of that in my face.
I don't quite understand the constant need to display Celestia as a bitch.
5938352 Because eventually the pay off of her regretting ever being that way toward him will be that much more satisfying.
She kinda is if you think 🤔 about all the things that could have been different for both her and the points in all