A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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nice to read more of this i do enjoy it
Good chapter sir!
Awww I was hoping Lyra and one of Spitfires twins would be human![:pinkiesad2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesad2.png)
Looks like James has some daggers again.
But this time its crescent moon shaped.
I honestly have no idea how those look.
And yay! Another chapter!![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
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Blades look something like this but not as curved.
The day has finally come, great heart warming chapter, though it's kinda hard to tell the foals gender just from their name.
Forgot to add this:
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It's less that I don't believe in them and more like I don't know where they go. I understand the rules about commas but since it is never really taught I try and fail at it.
DAAAAAAARTSS!!!! IMMA GUNNA THROW SUM SHET AT SUM OTHAR SHET!!!!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
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Love this story btw.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I have had the time to read this chapter. I have to say that you did a good Job on it. your writing skills are improving and I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
I am surprise that Princess Celestia and Princess Luna has not made him a knight of Equestria, has he not showed the rite dedication to Equestria and save the Princess menny time in the last year. This wood let them to become part of his herd if that was there wont or need. They can make him a Duke or Lord. He mite not appreciate this but it wood be fun to see how he wood muddle threw this. It your story and you should write it the way you think it should go.
I can't wait to see what happens next. So Keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
>is called Longshot
>rarely, if ever, uses ranged weapons
Derp
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That is a pretty accurate description about everything that happened.
Tempest means storm or lightining
What impresses me about your story is that it has the largest harem I've read on this site
, and if theres a fic with an even bigger harem someone give me a link.
weird Last name?
Why Star Jumper?
i mean like Star sparkle?
17 children....hold on James this is gonna be a bumpy ride....lol
I thought a blood diamond was bad