The Last of The Snowflakes

by AmethystFire

Epilogue

Princess Twilight Sparkle. Twilight has earned her wings. But when her wings appeared and started floating to the Ponyvillian floor, something amazing happened. In her eyes, a small figure appeared.

“Twilight.” A small sweet voice said.

“Snowdrop?” Twilight asked.

Somewhat looking up, she saw the ice blue Pegasus pony she called friend.

“Snowdrop! What are you doing here?” Twilight asked.

“I heard that you were earning your wings. And, as your friend, I wanted to be the first to congratulate you.” Snowdrop answered.

Twilight smiled, the best friend that she had when she was just a young filly after her brother, was the first to say, congratulations to her.

“Thanks Snowdrop, you’re the best. I hope that everything is certainly fine for you.” Twilight thanked.

“So far it is Twilight, I miss you. Hope to see you soon.” Snowdrop said.

“Bye Snowdrop.”

Tears ran down her face as she reached the ground with her new wings.

Goodbye Snowdrop, hope to see you soon.

Comments

[azednew]

>under 1,000 word chapters

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[La Barata]

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[Talia_Hoemke]

Some of the story didn't make a lot of sense but never the less I thought it was cute.

[AmethystFire]

3771000
Sorry, but it was in my first fanfic notebook, and most of those aren't really that great, but do prove a point.

[Talia_Hoemke]

3771198 it's absolutely fine I liked it regardless

[Lpegasus]

3772592 hey Dylan!

[Zane Wolfe]

I have not read this yet, though I do fully intend to do so. I do feel that while the concept very interesting, that the time-frame seems really off. That doesn't make as much sense when I read is as what I want to say, so read the following explanation first.

Snowdrop made THE FIRST SNOWFLAKES, at least if I recall the video in question. Before then there was snow, but it did not exist as snowflakes. As such, you would need have a pretty good reason for her to be alive AFTER the fall of Nightmare Moon. Luna was present when they used the last of the one's that Snowdrop carved herself. And Luna was also present when Snowdrop presented the very first snowflakes as well. The snowflakes were Snowdrop's gift, a star for winter. One she gave to both princesses. Even if Snowdrop presented the snowflake just days before the Nightmare Moon incident, there is nearly 1000 years between that time and when Twilight is born. There is no way for her to have met Twilight. If Snowdrop did not make her snowflake until after the return of Luna, then there is no way for her to miss Luna. This creates a massive hole in the entire concept. Thus, the only way I can see it is if you change either the canon timeline, making Luna return much sooner, or make it so that Snowflake was not the one who created the very first snowflakes.

This does not make it a bad idea, I actually love the character Snowflake and the concept seems great to me. But it definitely feels like this needs an AU tag. As I stated at the start of my post, I have not read this yet, but I will still do so.

Edit: Well I have since read the story... It has it's moments, it does. But it also doesn't make any sense at all a great deal of the time. The moments that did work, were great. They show a great deal of promise. The fact that the story doesn't make any sense whatsoever and it not a comedy at all, means that you need to keep working at this. A very good try, but it needs a lot of work.