"We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us." Joseph Campbell
Princess Celestia and Snowdrop both miss Princess Luna. When Twilight arrives, Celestia is happy; but not as happy as Snowdrop is. Twilight and Snowdrop have a huge relationship as best friends.
It's kind of short and settle, but it proves a point.
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>under 1,000 word chapters
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It's a bit to short to see the sadness. It would work a little better if was one whole chapter.
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Some of the story didn't make a lot of sense but never the less I thought it was cute.
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Sorry, but it was in my first fanfic notebook, and most of those aren't really that great, but do prove a point.
3771198 it's absolutely fine I liked it regardless
3772592 hey Dylan!
I have not read this yet, though I do fully intend to do so. I do feel that while the concept very interesting, that the time-frame seems really off. That doesn't make as much sense when I read is as what I want to say, so read the following explanation first.
Snowdrop made THE FIRST SNOWFLAKES, at least if I recall the video in question. Before then there was snow, but it did not exist as snowflakes. As such, you would need have a pretty good reason for her to be alive AFTER the fall of Nightmare Moon. Luna was present when they used the last of the one's that Snowdrop carved herself. And Luna was also present when Snowdrop presented the very first snowflakes as well. The snowflakes were Snowdrop's gift, a star for winter. One she gave to both princesses. Even if Snowdrop presented the snowflake just days before the Nightmare Moon incident, there is nearly 1000 years between that time and when Twilight is born. There is no way for her to have met Twilight. If Snowdrop did not make her snowflake until after the return of Luna, then there is no way for her to miss Luna. This creates a massive hole in the entire concept. Thus, the only way I can see it is if you change either the canon timeline, making Luna return much sooner, or make it so that Snowflake was not the one who created the very first snowflakes.
This does not make it a bad idea, I actually love the character Snowflake and the concept seems great to me. But it definitely feels like this needs an AU tag. As I stated at the start of my post, I have not read this yet, but I will still do so.
Edit: Well I have since read the story... It has it's moments, it does. But it also doesn't make any sense at all a great deal of the time. The moments that did work, were great. They show a great deal of promise. The fact that the story doesn't make any sense whatsoever and it not a comedy at all, means that you need to keep working at this. A very good try, but it needs a lot of work.
I love snowdrop storys