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xluferx
Writing is a new hobby of mine, and I want to share it with you. From my proud city I shall write and from there I will read. xluferx is similar to my name but I prefer Lufer
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Just wanted to ask something : isn't it a bit hard from Celestia to seal James into stone like that ?
i mean she and Luna , did the same for Discord because there was no other way to deal with him ,
same for Tirek , he was locked away in Tartarus because of what he did , and what he wanted to do
now James just arrived and decided to help Equestria to get some new technologies but it ended spreading the black death , and leaving Equestria in a terrible shape
is he really responsible for this ? he never forced the princesses to agree , he just shared what he knew he couldn't predict what would happen ,
but the princesses seemed at thos moment to be already in bad situation so , did she sealed James just because of an over- reaction ?
i'm not saying that it's bad or anything , i just wanted to know your thoughts about it.
after all there will be more chapters so may be we'll get more informations about this situation later.
Other than a few minor spelling errors, I don't see why this story is getting so many downvotes.
So the story is an alternative universe in which equestria and it's neighbours have everything like in Dishonored... Interesting but could be good ^.^ I will continue to read
You need to go back and edit this. There are a lot of grammatical errors and you need to pick a tense and stick with it. Either go full past tense or go present but do not mix the two constantly to the point that it sounds off and wrong to my ears when I read even a portion out loud. You also have tense contradictions even within some sentences. It seems like a good idea but does not read well currently and is turning me off from continuing.
Yay!!!!!!!!!!! Chrysalis is in the story!!!
Magic intresting
So are you remaking this story?
5310226 yep
5310249 That's good because wen you were following the same plot as the game it was kind of uninteresting.
5310301 yes o know, that one of the reasons of why i started to remake the story
Wait...first noble?
Did Blueballs die before the story even started? Dang.
Cant wait to see where you take this.
Dear mother of baneblaaaade a moon-sun mask what where they thinking i mean really that just looks akward. Nice keep it up friend
Oh that girl has gone to far erasing memorys of friends and family kill her! Blood for the blood god skulls for the skull throne milk for the khorne flakes!
Sandwiches for everyone!!!!
I always knew you cared about us readers here have a cookie.
5929967 Well at least somebody has a heart of gold
5930169 would that even be possibel?
5931726 We can make a call to our dear Medic from Tf2 if we want to do that a reality
,
but figurativerly is possible
5932635 ah the tf2 medic a trustworthy fella.