WARNING! THE FOLLOWING STORY WAS WRITTEN LONG BEFORE SEASON 6! AND I WILL NOT BE MAKING CHANGES TO KEEP UP WITH THE OFFICIAL CANON!
Angel Wings is your typical unicorn, at least that's what Ponyville thinks...but in truth, she hasn't told them everything about herself. She comes to Ponyville in hopes of not making emotional ties to anypony, but when the Mane 6 breaks her and lets her into their circle, she finds it hard to tell them the truth. Things become even more difficult when she becomes romantically involved with Big Mac, how will the truth be spilled?
Proofread by ajvasquezbrony28 and Silver Echo
Inspired by Nicholas Sparks' novels.
WARNING: May make you cry!!
Cover art done by CandySweets90240
Chapter art done by me!
Chapters (15)
Well, it stirred up the feels already.
I feel that this is gonna become a good famous well known supreme fan fic, so I wanna be one of the first people to acknowledge it and comment on it.
Oh no! She doesn't have what I think she haves, does she?
4705037 Shhh...don't spoil if you've figured it out!!
4705066 Okay. I'll keep my mouth shut for those who haven't.
Hmm... I'm intrigued!
there's only 2 pages?!?!
I wanna read the rest
So awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! /)
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Poor Angel.
Based off Nick Sparks novel?
Well, you are already a much better writer than him because unlike HIM, your novels aren't cliché and predicable.
Well done!
~Arya Stark
Angel had a hard life, despite the good times.
I'm really liking this story. Keep up the good work.
Itsuno Nando Demo. That's a song from Spirited Away. By far one of my favourite anime movies. It's a beautiful song, and you've made me re-listen to it, and I can imagine it being played on Piano. It sounds beautiful. ;)
*sniff* Poor Angel.
"sniff" It's so far so great, but poor Angel. "sniff" "sob!"
4996982 I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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And What's making me sadder is listening to this classical music song while reading this... {Maybe making it the theme song for this story.}
December Sky Song.......Very Pretty.
Well, this was a good chapter, Brush. Its good to see Angel becoming sociable. I really love that song that Angel sang. It was so beautiful.
There should be a new tag called "Heartbreaking" just because of this story damn...
Ooh man, that was funny, especially the last part!
OMG ANGEL DIAMOND WINGS, KAWAII. And 'Curse you Applejack with the fury of a thousand suns!' BEST PART XD
5323491 Patience is a virtue young grasshopper
DAW *Dies from cuteness*
Angel's old coltfriend is an asshole!
Abandoning her in her time of need!
Well crap...........HENCHMEN!!!!!!!!!! GET MY TISSUE BOX READY!!!!!!!!
Oh no I know what's coming...........everyone get down!!!!! Pinky barrage incoming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At least I think.....
No pinky barrage? hmmmm.............next chapter
And dang those feels
Well the pinky barrage wasn't so much of a barrage as I thought......
Good chapter still have my tissue box at the ready.
Pleas forgive my language here but holly shit that's deep......HENCHMEN!!.......get me my tissue box
Did....did that really just happen!?!?!?! 6 stallions just tried to.........just........WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....
Ok first of all caramel!?!?!?!?! I thought he was better than that even drunk!!!!!!!!
And that was a nice song.
Finally dang it Big Mac why ya gotta be so rude.......to angel
Ummmm did any one else think of dead pool when she started arguing with her mind or is it just me?
Dawwwwwwwwww
But I can't help but feel sad cause we already know she's gonna diy
or is she?
I noticed a few typos, The most notable being "fell" where you should have a 'feel'. Also you don't seem to have the Apple accent down in how you wrote their lines. As it stands I think the story up to now is ok.
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *sits in the edge of the chair* waiting on the next one....
D'awww!!! Angelmac FTW!
Real smooth, Big Mac.
I love this story I can't wait for the next chapter!
We all fear the unknown. Poor Angel. At least you had a big, strong, strapping young stallion to cuddle with. LOL
*Dies from cuteness*
What... the... buck...
Angel's nightmare just scared the crap out of me... No joke.
Well, that was bit of downer.
*Rubs head
So, this is your big story?
Well, I guess it's a good start. But, so far, and if you haven't edit this since instance mom I can be a bit more forgiving, but the paceing and grammer is... Could be done better
Oh boy ... In the past year I ahve read a good deal of story's but ... you're story is the seconde one that struck me (in a positiv way) in the emeotional department. Let's see what happens next.
Hmmmm ....... 'blows an army whistle' Pinkie Pie. Front and center.
Welp ... this is somthing we all have to live whit. We are born to eventualy die.
Regarding this chapter ... well ... you choud have elaborated a bit more regarding the interaction betwen Big Mac, Twilight and Angel. Other than that it was interesting. (Not counting the 4.7 magnitude earthquake that happend while reading it)
Pinkie Pie, I'm disappointed ... where was you're usual flear?
Good chapter by the way .... but now I want to know more about her past!!!
4 months ... well, knowing the mane 6 ... it will be an interesting 4 months for Angel when they findeout about her ilness.
Well ... that happend ! Steel it's good to se Angel making friend's.
Must .... resist to ... to ..daww .... Good going Big Mac
Ok ... where did I put the key's to the ICBM silo. I really need to send a big present to Tartarus.