Not bad for a first story. It felt kinda rushed but overall not bad.

Also seams you made a time paradox

Don't worry I'll go fix it.

so many EMOJIS!!

Also suprisingly good. The expectations bar was like an inch off the ground and you pole-vaulted over it. :

You have only up to go from here.

7792195 I'm actually planing on a sequal

Do you guys want a sequal?

7793643

YASSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7791852 and how did I make that tine paradox?

7793837 thanx

7793857 No wait my OTP IS SOARINDASH!!!!! This is not a hate fic ok just.... I wan't to try and do a story and suddenly this idea poped in my mind ming you this is myMOM AND MYSELF I'M KILLNG HERE!! It kindda hurts when I wrote this I was laughing at myself for writing this shit! the main plot of the story is dash commiting suicide it's THE POINT of the story

7793966 Sorry, I misread that. My bad. I understand if you want to scream at me, go ahead. My mistake.

7793991 It's ok people makes mistakes cuz nobody's perfect and right but did you read the author's note or the discription?

7793659 If you and your mom died before you were even born....how did you right the story? You made a paradox.

And yeah Id be up for a sequel

7794085 LOL THAT'S THE JK!! besides it's like a EB's POV kindda thing

It was so sad! I loved this story! It was amazing!

7798074 tx glad u like it

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Yes

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OMG!!! ONLY 8 LIKES AND 35 TUMBS DOWN!!!! WHAT?! ouch that hurts.. I didn't think it was THAT bad who ever tumbs down pls. tell me why so I may improve next time your doing me a favor by doing this

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There are 9 likes.

7802532 wow that makes me soo much better

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I liked it so it's 9. And I don't know why there are 35 dumbs down.

7802588 Ok... I don't give a sh anyway

7804551 ty

7804565 I will check the Death prayer

The Song That Needs To Be In The Background Should Be "Save Yourself" By My Darkest Days

I don't understand why this story has so much dislikes
This is a really good story
Yeah it's sad but still....

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Thank you and yeah, I don't know why people dislike it. I think it's preetey well written. But I guess some of it just wanna hate on my ship

I liked it but I have a few questions, who was the girl soarin fucked? Why didn't twilight call an ambulance? and also she wouldn't of died that fast, yes she would have passed out due to the blood loss but not have died. After about probably 30 minutes she would have died, well without having medical help. She might of could passed out due to the pain. Overall I enjoyed this fan fiction and I do wish there was more like it.

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I don't know why but Fanfics like this get 10 million dislikes! People don't like the main 6 getting physically or emotionally hurt I guess. Even if you put a warning people are idiots read it anyway. For example I'm writing a story and Rainbow Dash gets raped in the first chapter and I clearly put a warning and it ended up with 31 dislikes! Only the 1st chapter! It's bullshit honestly, I feel like some of these readers just read the description and click dislike. So it's not just you, it's like everyone who writes story's like this.

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A história, embora triste, foi fantástica