Nice chapter, although it could go a little slower. Also please don’t cancel this story. The reason i ask is i like kitsune’s (in equestria) stories but there are so few and almost all of them are canceled on this site. Have a nice day.
10707272 Alright I'll try to slow things down a bit, and don't worry I don't plan on quitting on this story there have been too many times where I found a good one only to see it was either cancelled or the author hadn't made a chapter in over a year. And i haven't looked for any groups so if you could point some out that'd be great!
Love it! As a new writer myself I recommend to go back occasionally on chapters to look for mistakes yourself. Even though I've reread my own stories multiple times, I still find some spelling errors and missing words. Have a follow and fav. Keep going strong.
Loving the story! Bit fast paced but I’m not one to talk. I see this story doing really well, just gotta work on the grammar a bit and the speed. Other than that though, it’s a great start!
Also, if you’re in need of an editor, PM me! I’d be more than happy to help!
Nice chapter, although it could go a little slower. Also please don’t cancel this story. The reason i ask is i like kitsune’s (in equestria) stories but there are so few and almost all of them are canceled on this site. Have a nice day.
Also are there any groups you want your story?
10707272
Alright I'll try to slow things down a bit, and don't worry I don't plan on quitting on this story there have been too many times where I found a good one only to see it was either cancelled or the author hadn't made a chapter in over a year. And i haven't looked for any groups so if you could point some out that'd be great!
10707309
Firs off with to fast i don’t mean upload speed.
Some groups can be:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198651/humans-turned , https://www.fimfiction.net/group/205425/displaced , https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198135/godsdeitiesspirits-and-monsters ,
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/210507/human-turned .
Also I want to ask, would you like to start a group for kitsune(s) in equestria with me?
10707317
Sure man that sounds cool a Kitsune group sounds like a great Idea!
10707330
Ok, I will make one now quick.
Having future knowledge of mlp and being an instant master of your powers/weapons, will cause issues with character growth.
10707330
Ok it is made.
10707336
It's all part of the plan my friend I've thought ahead. (He will lose those memories)
10707331
Hey I joined the group
You know when you re-read your story and fix things only to realize that there was till stuff you missed its real aggravating.
You can add this story to kitsune now to ya know.
10707370
It won't let me for some reason.
10707371
Ok i will do it. In what folder should i do it?
10707373
Hmm put it in fox.
Love it, but you need more commas and smaller paragraphs
10707583
Alright thx for the tip I'll be sure to change some things around. Hope to see you in the comments again!
Love it! As a new writer myself I recommend to go back occasionally on chapters to look for mistakes yourself. Even though I've reread my own stories multiple times, I still find some spelling errors and missing words.
Have a follow and fav. Keep going strong.
10707632
Than you my dear shadow, welcome to the Legion. Hope to see you in the comments again!
Loving the story! Bit fast paced but I’m not one to talk. I see this story doing really well, just gotta work on the grammar a bit and the speed. Other than that though, it’s a great start!
Also, if you’re in need of an editor, PM me! I’d be more than happy to help!
I'm loving the story so far. Hope you continue it.
10707777
There absolutely no way I won’t keep this story going.
10707791
Nice. I'm looking forward to it. Have a nice day.
10707933
You too bro 😎
Dude love your story so far. Hope you continue to greatness and maybe have a good snack along the way
This story is a good one.👍
10708797
Thank you friend.
Welcome to the shadows
10708699
Thx and speaking of snacks I just finished some doritos with lunch.