Alright, I like it so far and can't wait to see more.

10259051
Thank, if you've got any suggestions feel free to tell me them

10259058
So far it's pretty good and I'm glad you're not making the MC a doormat like most anime protagonists.

10259071
I kinda based Ethan's personality off of Kazuma from Konasuba

10259099
Nice, will other girls come into story or just these 12?

10259113
More will show, mainly to find these 12.

10259119
Then if may suggest, do a Rule34 Big Mac because ewe don't have enough stories with her.

10259123
Hmmm, maybe, I might come up with something later along the lines.

10259123
Maybe something along the lines of a spell hitting the wrong person and making a clone?

10259146
Or you can just have it to where Big Mac is a girl in this universe so you don't have to make things complicated, alot of people do it.

10259153
True

10259153
Any other ideas?

10259163
Nothing at the moment

Huh this story reminds me ,of another story one here where it had,the same premise as this one

10259451
Well I did take a little inspiration from a few stories that are similar in concept.

10259485
I see, also the story reminded me of this one a bit
. You might have already read it i guess https://www.fimfiction.net/story/170928/roommates

10259495
Yeah, Roommates is one of them.

So these girls are from a RGRE.

10259726
I have, no clue what that is.

10260252
Reverse Gender Roles Equestria, an Equestria where all the gender roles are flipped. Mares work while stallions do the housework and raise the foals, that sort of thing.

10260319
Thanks.
10259726
Ah, then sort of, there are a few exceptions to the norm in their version of Equestria

Ethan swiped his hand at Rainbow launching dozens of Kuni shaped lightning bolts made of his aura, Rainbow took to the skies but the aura Kuni followed her, they were hot on her tail and gaining, when she made a sharp turn they made a sharper turn when she when faster they went even faster, then Rainbow tried to backflip over the aura Kuni, but the aura Kuni immediately changed direction and hit her exposed back.

Kunai is spelled with an a. At least you didn't put an s at the end.

10260490
Oh, thank you for pointing out spelling error, I didn't know Kunai had an A in it.

10260495
You're welcome.

10260501
If I've made any more feel free to point them out.

10260506
A few.

"Tomorrow, the mal is closed on Mondays." Ethan continued.

Mall.

"Thank Celestia!" Applejack said think she'll be able to get out of the dress she was in.

Pretty sure that should be thinking.

The other ponies nodded in fear of Twilight and the girls followed Ethan to his apartment, it wasn't big but it wasn't small, one about 3 rooms, there wasn't much in it either, just a few futons, a flat-screen TV, and the basic things an apartment needs, like a kitchen and bathrooms, "You'll have to find something to sleep on, I'll buy some air mattresses when we go to the mall,"

One should probably be only.

"Well, we've been from our own world, so we've got nowhere to go, so we'll be happy to take you up on your offer," Twilight replied before giving a glare to the others, "Won't we girls?"

They've been what from their own world?

"That's your punishment for randomly starting a fight with him, don't worry about any injuries on our part, I've already cast a healing spell on them, and Silver Spoon was healed during the fight," Twilight said motioning to a fully healing and wide awake Silver Spoon.

Pretty sure that should say fully healed.

Ethan snickered and said, "I have my moments of niceness, my moments of jackassery, and my moments of perversion. I'm not some white knight, your gonna have to go back in time for those kinds of heroes. Also, you kinda deserve it since you attacked me without reason."

You're gonna.

Ethan made a pair of scissors with his aura, only Twilight could see it, but Ethan made it known with one swipe at the two mares, their manes and tails were given a haircut, Applejack losing the most hair, and their clothes were cut to ribbons, Ethan seemed to fully enjoy the view he was getting, the two mares covered themselves as to be they could.

Themselves the best.

And finally: pretty much all of your paragraphs are long run on sentences. Using commas isn't enough to fix this. I would suggest finding an editor.
Other than that and the ridiculous bust sizes you gave the Mane 6 the story seems to have an interesting premise so keep it up.

10260523
Thank you, also I have been considering lowering those bust sizes, which I have now done as well, also... Editor? How's that work?

10260550
Not sure as I have never written a story on here. You will have to ask another author. Proofreader is another word for it used on this site so again I don't know.

10260550
Still a little silly but more believable on the bust sizes.

10260556
Well, we're not talking about humans here.

10260557
Yes which is why I find these new sizes acceptable. I just always found someone expecting the usual productiveness out of a Rarity with a bust size bigger than Celestia's flanks to be taking it too far.