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Nice to see more of this, and I think the idea of sort of following Luna after her return and how that looks, especially from the view of
LucasIgnis as a part of his story is a good plan.I do like that he decided to share the full truth of his situation, and in a private space so that the 3 who need to know most can know but then a working story (like the automatic “Ignis ferrum” story) can be used for anyone else unless they end up needing to know.
I do believe that upon casting a lie detector spell you should make sure it is working by asking the target to state a known lie. Ignis’ “known lie” could be something as easy as “I am a pony” just to make sure the spell is actually working.
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Oh yeah I guess I could've added the calibration lie huh? In world it's the same day as the last time they used the spell so I didn't even think about it tbh. Hm it's a small enough detail that I can probably add it in when I get home, thanks again for the comment!
I love it so far, focusing on luna is the right choice in my opinion. But have some of the mane 6 come around too!
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Ayy, of course! It might be a decent number of chapters before they pop in again, I'd say *most* of season 1 is going to be off-screened but I got a couple canon breaks (show canon not fic canon) planned where they'll slot in
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Ayyyy can't wait for some of that!!!!
Also I private messaged you if you want some extra opinions or extra set of eyes