NOTE: This is my first fanfic/story on this account.
NOTE 2: Here I can put pony/human or someone/one pony, but in this story it's the same, it depends on how you want to see it.
-TWILIGHT POV-
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Everything started to become cloudy, I was right about Cadence...
She isn’t the same loving foal sitter I remember. How stupid I was?
Is Cadence really evil? No.... She is not Cadence, her normal magic is turquoise blue, also her attitude is the opposite to her. The one who is taking Cadence's place is doing it wrong, anyone who knew her would realize it. I could have gone to Princess Celestia, but the same thing would have happened anyway. Then, why my mentor, Spike, even my brother, why didn't they listen to me? They know her well, she is the niece of Princess Celestia, but why, all they did was to leave me behind. Where was the magic of our friendship?
Did they discard everything they learned? Did they just "ignore" it? No, I don't understand.
Then Twilight started to awake, she was tired, she wanted to fight, she wanted to stand up, she wanted to get out of this, and save everyone, she couldn't think anymore because she fainted, not only because of the impact, but because of the spell that the fake Cadence had cast, everything was spinning in Twilight's mind, she had never felt this, it was very new for her, she just wanted to wake up, but she couldn't. It was like she had gone into a paralysis …
Then she woke up, she felt different, she was exhausted, It was like her emotions changed, she felt happy but at the same time sad, then she saw where she was, she was, on the water?!!!!! She rubbed her eyes to realize that it was real, she was walking on water, rather than floating, this was difficult, not even when she was training with Zecora to defeat Trixie could she do this with ease, not only was that, but she felt that her magic had become much stronger, and then she proceeded to look around. Then she saw some bars, she approached them with a lot of fear of falling into the water, she still wanted to know where she was, but apparently, she did not know that place, she couldn’t understand it, when she approached, she saw some red eyes and sharp fangs, when she came closer, she saw it.
"KYAAA! A giant fox!” was the only thing that Twilight could say and quickly moved away, but she could see a seal, it was very strange, it didn't look like anything from Equestria, maybe it had been sent here? no, it was impossible.
Then the fox roared, which created a gust of sound. "You, you're not naruto, I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I'VE BEEN HERE BUT I'M GOING TO GET FREE AND GO WITH NARUTO!"
"Na-Naruto? sorry to bother you I swear" Twilight said bending down "No... I don't know where Naruto is, or where am I? Somepony sent me here …" answered the afraid mare.
"Somepony?!" growled the fox. "A pony?! REALLY?! In what kind of world I have reborn? This is so...ugh" thought with a ‘I don't give a damn’ look on his face.
"Yes, I'm sorry, I guess you're talking about another creature, huh?” said a shocked Twilight.
“Well, my name is Kurama" Twilight was shocked, what did he just say? “Huh?" "Kurama, my name is Kurama!" said Kurama.
"Umm I …" "Kurama, my name is Kurama! You dumb girl!" Kurama said again.
"Ah, sorry for my behavior haha, my name is twilight, Twilight Sparkle, nice to meet you ehh, Kurama" she said with a bit funny tone while scratching behind her head. That made Kurama remember Naruto, not only because of his funny or teasing tone, but also because of his discipline when he was 14 years old, until the last time he saw him, but what surprised him even more was how Twilight acted, she was so calm …
"Twilight, how old are you?" asked Kurama half annoyed, he didn't really know Twilight, that's why he was upset, not only because she had entered the seal, but because she could be its bearer, it was like when he met Naruto, but thanks to that kit his heart was softening a little, and he could bear to have guests …
"I'm 16 years old, I...um well that's a weird question for me anyways coming from an old fox, and you?"
"Hey, what did you just call me LITTLE BRAT?" growled an angry Kurama.
"KYAAA, sorry Kurama hahaha. You know, it was just a joke" Twilight apologized.
'Why do I have to be given this kind of carriers?' thought Kurama with a long face. "And you Kurama?" asked the lavender mare.
"Hey, what the …" grunted Kurama.
"How old are you?" asked her.
"I don't know …" answered a thoughtful fox.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN WITH THAT?" asked a confused Twilight.
"You don't understand? I don't remember, I'm several millenia old and I've already lost count" admitted the bijuu.
"Millenia??! Do you know how old that is? You are very old then …" answered an impressed mare.
"OLD, I AM NOT THAT OLD !!!" said Kurama.
"Yes, you are, you're lots of centuries of years old." she insisted.
"That maybe, but it doesn't mean I'm old Naru… I mean Twilight". He answered irritably, remembering his old friend.
"Naruto, the one you said was your friend, he must have been someone very important to you?" She asked.
"Yes, he was, he was the first person, who understood me" the fox sighed.
"You are like him, the one who understand me. He was my first true friend. I was alone for a while before I met him ..." Kurama thought about saying the next. "After that, I died."
"Oh, I didn't know that you have... " the little mare apologized.
"I sacrificed myself, he was already an adult, I lied to him telling him, that even if I gave him my power he would die, I lied to him, the one who had to die was me, but it was worth it so that they could save themselves and defeat the villain" Kurama said.
"You are a really good friend, you cared about him, and you protected him, you are someone or a very good … animal … "
"I'm a kyubi, well a bijuu." He said.
"A? A bijuu, what is that? asked a curious Twilight.
"I will explain you, better, I will show you …" He put his fingers on her head, and suddenly she knower everything, or well. most of the things.
"AH! nani, you mean to tell me that you are a beast, the strongest, and they are living forms of chakra, I guess it's similar to Equestrian magic?" Said an overwhelmed Twilight.
"Agh, yeah, our chakra is like magic but more powerful I think" he said tired.
"Second...HOW DID YOU DO THAT I MEAN WHEN YOU TOUCHED ME, I HAD SEEN EVERYTHING" yelled a shocked Twilight.
"Well yeah is one of my powers" Answered nonchalantly the fox. "That's incredible! I should investigate it sometime and" Twilight couldn't finish her sentence when Kurama interrupted her. "I think it's time to wake up" said Kurama and then looked to Twilight.
"Ehh, what do you mean wake up, aren't you real?" asked Twilight.
"I'm not saying I'm not real, just that your life is in danger" Answered Kurama.
"In danger...Cadence!" Twilight shouted, "How do I wake up, if it's not a dream but,” said a scared mare.
"I don't know what is going on, but don't worry Twilight, Just focus! I will help you if you need it, just call me if you need help,” said Kurama.
"Kurama" said a grateful mare.
"See you soon" he said and put his fist near to Twilight, and she bumped it with her hoof. Then Twilight's vision began to blur, now her mission is to find the real Cadance and bring her back.
"I promise to save you, I promise to bring you back, I promise to save Equestria."
"I WILL BE THE MOST POWERFUL UNICORN IN ALL OF EQUESTRIA."
Whatever it takes …
Nice start to your first story. Especially for someone that doesn’t speak English. Great job.I shall wait for more.
Whats gonna happen with Spike in this?
This could be interesting but I hope that everyone gets chewed out. They were so caught up in the wedding they weren't really listening to twilight. And what exactly was twilight supposed to do when she see the bride putting what looks to some sort of mind control spell on the groom her brother. Celestia didn't even notice her niece was replaced and applejack apology was lame. We didn't know the impostor was an impostor. That is the whole point of impostor! How about we are sorry for putting a wedding ahead of our friendship and not really listening when you tried to talk with us. And we are going try to be better about listening from now on.
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Thank you very much indeed, I hope the next chapters I make have a good writing and plot so everyone can like them <3
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I already have an idea for spike, because I feel that he doesn't have so much protagonism in that chapter, and I would like him to have it, I'll see how I do it.
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In fact what bothers me the most is that no one apologized to her and they continued as if nothing has happened, or at least most of them, because I feel that applejack was the only one who tried to apologize and was the most honest with her
Now Twi must learn the way of the ninja and live up to Naruto’s legacy. Become the new Nine-Tails Jinchuriki.
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It just seems like an excuse more than an apology because the whole point of imposter is to pretend to be someone they're not. You are not supposed to know that they aren't that person.
Twi is about to unleash the tailed beast within her!
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Of course it is, the problem is..How?
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in fact u have reason
A lot of mistakes, and how does Kurama appeared behind the Chakra seal, no one in Equestria can do them and bijus don`t seal themselfs so more logical wil be if Twilight would put a magical barrier between herself and Kurama
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They only way to do that is that someone who has the power Chakra sealed Kurama inside Twi when she was just a filly just after she was born in the hospital or when she was a bit older around 6 or 7 years old used Genjutsu on her and implanted Kurama in her.
Great chapter
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thanks