I learned to fight to mask my own weakness. Never to hurt but to help. Or at least that's what I use to tell myself.
An unknown warrior from another world arrives against his will.
I plan on making this a long one so sit back and enjoy the show.
The story starts off a little slow but picks up later I promise.
It is also my first fic so criticism is welcomed.
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first!
by some odd reason I am having trouble understanding this story, probably because of me. Have a thumbs up anyway.
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Don't worry, explanations are coming in the next few chapters. Hopefully that clears up any confusion you might have.
you should get a pre-reader.
seems intresting though... you earned a thumbs up and a favourite
1926386
Yeah that would probably be a good idea
Perhaps he could yes but that doesn't mean he has to do it.
Getting information without causing harm is the best option for him atm.
Even when the next chapter will probably hurt alot for the gaurds :3
1995272
Yeah, I see what you're saying but it really wasn't a fight it was more like this
I don't see a regular farming pony beating a world class fighter either.
1995816
1997191 Yeah really.
Why Do I understand the (thai) Boxing talk???
very descriptive, so vivid I thought I was there
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Glad you enjoyed it. My goal is to bring the story to life and I'm glad it's working.
Yeah, Muay Thai isn't very fancy so it's pretty simple to understand.
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Eventually but I've been busy and have only a little over a thousand words on the next chapter.
I do plan on finishing this story even if it kills me so worry not!
another good story dies
but it bothers me that was suspended in the most interesting part a fight with the royal guard
anyone know of any other similar story to this
2129501 and I use your faith to make despair smoothies