Well i can't say it's great nor bad but in the middle tilted a bit to good good job brah i don't usually read humanized clop but meh

Fps Russia approved hard core sax with spitfire and rainbow if it was a three some say with 'thinks' spike

This was hot! Thumbs up!

Hey you do a good job with the Humanized ponies.
More Humanized ponies clop

i will never really understand what is the differences between humanized ponies and reading regular porn or hentai. Just makes no sense whatsoever.

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I only noticed one mistake
and well to me it still is better than some stuff from trolls so all we can do is support the writer and help them out

Awesome

I know this Clop may not be the best, and I kinda rushed it, so sorry for that. I will try my best to make the next one more enjoyable.

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My Ultimate Reaction

Good job on da clop! Seriously, why all the downvotes? Probably a simple matter of clop disapproval, I guess. Other than missing the word rip in the first chapter and a somewhat monotonous use of da word vagina, it was perfect!

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Yeah, I have gotten better votes on my other stories. I noticed my repetitive use of some words and I will fix that up within my next story or so

a fine story. I enjoyed it. one thing. PLEASE MAKE A CHAPER 3