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That was hot.
Toys? Toys!? This is going to be very interesting
Well i can't say it's great nor bad but in the middle tilted a bit to good
good job brah i don't usually read humanized clop but meh 
Fps Russia approved hard core sax with spitfire and rainbow if it was a three some say with 'thinks' spike
The fun has Ben doubled first to say it
This was hot!
Thumbs up!
one boo boo
Spitfire’s pants had a gigantic from the behind
Other than that WOW
Hey you do a good job with the Humanized ponies.
More Humanized ponies clop
1947292 More than one, and aside from the major typos, some more variety in word choice is needed. Ignoring how fast the plot moves, of course, since this is porn for porn's sake. In any case some heavy editing would do this story good.
i will never really understand what is the differences between humanized ponies and reading regular porn or hentai.
Just makes no sense whatsoever.
1947607
I only noticed one mistake
and well to me it still is better than some stuff from trolls so all we can do is support the writer and help them out
Awesome
I know this Clop may not be the best, and I kinda rushed it, so sorry for that. I will try my best to make the next one more enjoyable.
^ agreed
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My Ultimate Reaction
Good job on da clop! Seriously, why all the downvotes? Probably a simple matter of clop disapproval, I guess. Other than missing the word rip in the first chapter and a somewhat monotonous use of da word vagina, it was perfect!
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Yeah, I have gotten better votes on my other stories. I noticed my repetitive use of some words and I will fix that up within my next story or so
I have the wierdest wingboner right now...
I believe that the word "Rip" should be in there somewhere.
Why are they both whereing skirts there more jean girls
Several lines later:
So, they put Spitfire's panties back on?
I believe that should be "She was WEARING nothing underneath"
This is confusing. It should be "Dash chuckled and shoved both her fingers inside Spitfire's vagina"
I believe that the word "Rip" should be in there somewhere.
I I already pointed this out, several months ago, as did another person. You need to heavily edit this story. This could be a good story, these things just need to be fixed.
2395893 same here
a fine story. I enjoyed it. one thing. PLEASE MAKE A CHAPER 3
2395893 This might happen to a lot of us.
I prefer my porn with a bit of plot to them, but this is alright.
I prefer my porn with a bit of plot to its name, but this is alright.