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All her life, Fluttershy felt different from the other pegasi. She preferred the ground to the clouds, and the simple love of her animal friends always seemed to refresh her... And she never really had to eat... She didn't remember her parents, either...
One day, though, her life changes forever, when she and her best friends find out what she truly is.
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Interesting...
Although I'm sure there are out there, this is the first Fluttershy changeling fiction I've seen. I was this close to just writing one myself
Whelp, commence read. High expectations ahoy!
I hope you won't make some cliche plot.
hope this wont be a
'x is changeling and must convert everything not changeling into changeling'.
those are relly annoying
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That is something I can guarantee that it is not.
This is a horsie story
Hm, interesting. Although I think Fluttershy would have looked around for any unicorn before deciding it was her magic. I would like to see more, kind sir.
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Welp, if I'd thought of that'd I'd have used that.
As it is though, let's say she somehow felt herself using the magic.
2158520 there is a one shot, but it's supposed to be a guessing game and doesn't focus on her being a changeling.
with this, Pinkie will be the only one missing a long detailed story about being a changeling. unless i missed something.
Let me guess. Fluttershy shall rule as queen overlord of ALL Equestria, dominating Queen Chrysalis and having her friends as loyal servents.
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Mmmmnope.
2159053 Awww. I wanted to see her horrified reaction as Twilight suddenly get's mind controlled, then Fluttershy hiding herself into the darkest crack in fear of hurting her friends, only for Chrysalis to capture them al and threaten to turn them into changelings, only for Fluttershy go into rage mode, then bring peace to all the land,
At least, that is how I would have done it....
This is an interesting story. However, I do have one problem with it: When you're having two or more characters talking to each other, you don't keep the dialogue in the same paragraph. You start a new one each time the character talking changes. For example, this
Should be this
Or something like that. I'm no author, so I don't know if I divided that up well enough. Just though you should know.
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Sheesh, yer postin' like it's an irreparable problem. Not so! It is already fixed.
2159022 Pinkie's got one. She's actually a group of changelings. It's called "When They Found Us." It's really very good.
2159544 Oooh, thanks.
2159544 there's another one where pinkie is chrysalis's sister as well
A little fast paced for my taste, but otherwise not bad.
Well, it took nearly a year, but I think there's finally a changeling fic for the entire mane 6! Let's see, Twilight in Mirror's Image, Applejack in The Irony of Applejack, Rainbow Dash in Forever A Changeling, Pinkie in That One Who's Name I Can't Remember But I'm Fairly Certain Is A Pun, Rarity in The Three Sisters, and now finally Fluttershy has her very own changeling story, all about her!
Hooray! Let's celebrate!
Hmmmm.
Yes, I do quite like it. More?
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There was one with Fluttershy, a while back, but it was a little oneshot and ironically flew under the radar, very much Fluttershy-style.
The only flaw I see is that you didn't say what happened to the horn! Explanation? yes please!
It makes sense. I have my own fan theories about the details behind flutterling, but I do not want to spoil anything if our ideas happen to overlap.
Dang, someone beat me to it.
Edit: Read through it, and I must say I'm intrigued. The pacing is a bit hasty, but I think it's a bit soon to be judging this fic on just a little over a thousand words.
So I'm going to watch this with great interest.
Faster! I must have moar to read!
Yo Flutters, yer a bug.
Dun Dun Dun!!! Very good pacing in the last part. The Pinkie bit breaks the flow a bit but the rest was very dynamic, and you are quite good at pacing the gradual reveal. Maybe a bit more detail on the emotions.
The premise is unoriginal (cliche is just a nice way to put it) but I feel that your spin will be rather unique. I doubt you can break the cliche endings though... Bah, insulting way to say that I like it.
Also, I'm crude. 69 likes! (Happy for the 0 dislikes!)
Yep, the spin is original, this would also explain her ability to understand animals. I like how you had her second nature influence her magic, when Twi got healed.
I look forward to the exponential chapters. (2,4,8,16,32,64,128,256,512,1024,2048,4096,8192,16384....
Her friends better still love her after they find out. And Twilight better not send celestia a letter... Before talking to fluttershy first.
2162273 It's going to make her so sad. She really wanted to be a tree. At least bugs live in trees!
promising... expecting more in a decent time frame Go artist! Paint your masterwork!
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There was also one where everyone in Equestria was a changeling except for Princess Celestia. It was pretty funny.
I must have more of this....
2158520 2161441 2160657 "The Vampony Chronicles" by Steampunk Brony has Fluttershy as a changeling, but she's not the main character. I think that Blackwing also wrote a Changeling Fluttershy story, but I'm not sure.
2160127 Which one's that?
2162501a million word chapter does sound delicious.
This is interesting so far.
Hmmm... Why do I have a feeling that this line:
is going to be quite meaningful to the story... Welp, gotta read more!
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I second that notion. Title, please!
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It's here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36982/all-i-really-needs-a-smile-smile-smile
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For that matter, aren't you afraid?
Why, thank you! Will check that out!
Also, it's quite interesting that no one thought of that name of yours for so long. There is one with space instead of underscore, but still... Are they afraid of Molestia finding them for that, or what?
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Of course not, since she isn't real.
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What if they don't know that?
2168540 Thank you.
OH SHIT SON... MOAR!
... Wait NOT MOAR I DON'T WANT TO BE A CHANGELING!
I wish Hagrid would show up in a Pony story. It would make no sense, but still.
Busts down the door, gives Twilight a cake, bends Celestia's horn in a knot.
It'd be the best
Slightly disappointed Chrysalis is still evil. Oh well. Can't wait for more!
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Who says she's evil?
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Yo writer, yer a hack.
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