Fluttershy and Rainbow have always been friends, but always so opposite of each other. Their differences have made them friends who would always stand up for each other, but when it matters most, can they truly take wing for each other?
A short tale that proves I can write short stories, even if it has alternate endings. First ending is happy/romantic, the second sad/tragic.
There will be a third ending if my friend Rutulis.Luna ever sends it to me
Either way, this is the first story I can officially mark "Complete"
Amazing
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Thanks
That was beautiful
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So I take it you read the happy ending? I was so happy with that ending. I wrote the bad ending, and it made me cry
Not bad. The formatting was a bit of a pain but I made it through. The alternate ending thing is really cool. Adding it to the adventure folder in Twilight's Library
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I write all this stuff in Word, so sometimes it doesn't always translate well.
Thanks for the good news, though!
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I'm not very impressed by the writing in this piece, but I really love this line. :) Also, good job on Zecora's dialogue!