Almost done. · 8:00pm Mar 13th, 2016
So, I've been working on the next chapter for What I've Done, and it's been coming along pretty good so far! The only problem, though, is that I need to go to work tonight, and am unable to finish it up on account of my need to sleep.
Anyway, if you want to be my wing-men, take a peek, sneak in some suggestions, or berate me for not getting it done sooner, you can check it out here. Just remember, though, that this is an unfinished draft, I haven't even done some basic editing yet. But if you've been chomping at the bit waiting for me to update, hopefully this can tide you over for a bit.
Almost done with what I've done, has a nice ring to it, don't ya' think?
Found a spot in it where it seems like you left something out.
Caught up to what you've so far typed. Loving it so far, despite the part I mentioned feels like something is missing.
Would be interesting if Akitesh and the Captain knew the form he has somewhat changed back into (human), maybe even mention him as a protected race in their alliance or something. I don't know. I'm very tired right now.