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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 54 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 55 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 335 views
  • 56 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 57 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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  • 57 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Jun
15th
2021

At last, the final chapter is done! · 10:31am Jun 15th, 2021

So, I know it's late, and I'm tired, but I finally finished it; the last chapter of Myrddin. I'm tired, though, and I need to get to bed, so thank you in advance for proofreading it, you don't know how much it helps me out. It probably needs to be broken up into two, and where I need to do that is abundantly obvious when you read it. Just let me know what you think, and I will adjust the chapter(s) accordingly.

The Last Testament of Myrddin Chapter 5 and (possibly) 6.

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Comments ( 2 )

All good. And you right, it's better to leave prophecy as epilogue/next chapter.

5535500 You see, that's what I was thinking, but I felt like I needed a second opinion, first. Thanks for giving me your two cent's worth!

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