When news of pony disappearances reaches Canterlot, Princess Celestia implores the girls to travel to the neighboring country of Saddellia, a kingdom of earth ponies ruled by a brutish king. Eagerly accepting this mission, they make the journey and, along the way, meet and save the crown prince of Saddellia, Prince Linden.
Things become difficult when the young heir becomes smitten with Rainbow Dash and royal trickery traps the two in a marriage betrothal. As the pegasus struggles with her growing feelings for Linden, she and her friends quickly learn that there are dark secrets being kept in Saddellia and they all must tread carefully if they are ever to go home again.
Chapters (15)
YAY!!! It's HERE! It's HERE, It's HERE, It's HERE!!! One of my all-time favorite stories EVER!!! And it's been updated! HOORAY!!!
And things have gotten moving!!! The twists with Bright Song and Nightfire? Brilliant! Didn't see them coming. And huzzah, things are FINALLY getting out in the open! The tension, the drama ... it seems like we're nearing a conclusion and I cannot wait!
This is so awesome! Thanks for finally posting your story on FimFiction!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! maybe i can do a better cover picture. give me linden's colors?
This story is finally on fimfiction?
OhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygosh Hell yes!!!
It's here! Woot!
Gonna reread it when I get a chance.
Oh wow, Been a while since I have seen this story. And an update as well!
I wonder if the girls are going to pull off what they did during that big brawl during the Changeling invasion though. It's canon that they can fight their way through a small army on their own after all.
Imagine my surprise when I see this up here on FIMFiction. And may I say...
WHAT A TWEEEEEEESSSSTTTTTT
Keep it up! I CANNOT WAIT for more of this story!
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Aww, you don't like my sketch? You want to draw art for my story? Yay!
Linden's colors, I believe, are blue. I describe his friends pretty well but realized I don't mention very often what he looks like. He definitely has blue eyes and I think I called his coat color blue in the story. He's a deeper shade than dashie though. Mane and tail? I'd say gold maybe.
Glad you like the story!
2890934 thank you!!! so he has a wonderbolt color scheme? that's awesome!! you should mention that in the story at one point
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Hmm, maybe that's why I didn't get too descriptive with Linden, as opposed to his friends. This let everybrony imagine him how they like him best.
2891382 *is vinyl beat on FF.net * been awhile. i hope to see more soon!! can't wait for more!
Lol
How could Rainbow friends minupulate her and the prince like that?
Thistle Whistle?
Edit: damn I was close though :(
Shits about to get real
CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS MILLITARY BUNNY SITTERS!!!
YAY!
Dun-Dun-dun?
For some reason I want them all to dance along to
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Not sure why.....
I remember reading the first three chapters a few months ago on Fanfiction, and for whatever reason I had decided not to continue. Now that I've read it again though, I can't get enough of it!
More! More! MORE!!
okay i am really enjoying this, i am kinda worried about Fluttershy, I hope she is okay.
so i guess with Rarity and Fletcher getting cozy, that doesn't bode well for Spike?
oh please update this soon. i hope Luna or Celestia lead some troops into SAdellia
This is actually good
Ah want the whole dang army at mah doorstep, Pronto.
Yes she do-done-does!
Applejack! I told you its gonna fix itself in the story! You dont need to call the Equestrian army!
Pinkie! Not you too!
Excuse for a minute ill be back in a chapeter or two..
ALL HAIL OUR NEW FEARLESS LEADER RAINBOW DASH!
See? She do like him!
Mweheheheh... Victory is m-
You've gotta be kidding me...
Give me a break... JUST READ THE DAMN STORY!
Told you so.
Aplogy accepted.
Just sit there and be quiet.
And also, update please. I think we all wanna read more.
I couldn't agree more.
You might. You never know. And Twilight I hope you have a plan to help
Eternal shame upon those who dislike this story
May you die slowly in horrible painful ways.....
WHO WANTS CUPCAKES????
Holy crap its here! Derp - clearly I missed the memo.
Summary of all my comments over on fanfiction.net:
This is awesome, you're awesome, and you should feel awesome!
There, I think that covers it. Oh wait...
There. Consider yourself spammed with all the emotes I couldn't use before.
I was browsing over on ff.net when I suddenly thought to search and see if this fic was here, and whaddaya know! It is! TWICE THE AMAZINGNESS!
THE SUSPENSE!!!
Oh noes the forbidden word hath been uttered! TAKE COVER!!!
Erma that was meant for chapter two sorry ^_^
2895389 Lol how come I see you on almost all the fanfics I read? XD
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shhhhhhh.......ignore me......
Is there a way to see stories related to this? I love this type of story (for some reason esp when RD is the one that is the one that receives the crush) and I am unable to wait for the next chapter - I feel like im gonna explode
Double space the paragraphs, PLEASE!
Please write more chapters! I've been waiting for many months. This is my favorite story!
Please don't listen to any of the haters of your story. It is an amazing story and my absolute favorite on fimfiction. Bar none. Pleeeeeeeeeese write more!!
This is a lovely story please update it
Do you know what this fanfic is totally awesomeeeee!
It's one of my favourite now!
Pleaseeee upload more chapter.
I really cant wait to know how it will end :)
Thank you for sharing a great fiction like this.
Ps. Sorry for my bad English.
What are Lindins official colors? I am adding color to the cover image, but I don't know his colors.
I always imagined him brown.
I'm just going to make him brown and black.
I have everything else done already.
fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/284/5/5/betrothed_and_betrayed_colored_by_kids_in_the_corner-d82flbt.jpg Well there it is...
Hello?
Please don't leave us with such a cliffhanger!
This is my favorite story, please don't let it be the end.
"My man, it's been far too long since you update"
"That's right," Tiny spoke up from behind "Nearly 200 weeks"
"Might as well be 1000 weeks." Linden shook his mane and shruddered dramatically.
That's my question. When is the update?
If a chinchilla gets wet, the fur falls out and they die. That needs fixed.