Twilight charged across the room and pounced on Cinder Smile, who was still almost suffocating with laughter. Twilight got close to her mouth, then croaked. Okay there, now the frog knew which way was out. Or… did he not hear her? Twilight attempted to croak again, this time louder. There, he was sure to hear that. Cinder attempted to control her laughter lest she bounce Twilight off. She croaked back at Twilight and stuck her tongue out.
Yess! The frog was… That’s no frog… Twilight swiped at her tongue, making Cinder giggle and gag, as her hoof still tasted faintly like soap. Okay, now the frog was fr-
”Ribbit”
THE OTHER PONY CAUGHT HER! Twilight glared up at Velvet. Why was it so hard to get the adults from swallowing Mr.Frog? Twilight jumped off Cinder and sat on the floor moping. Why did they have to constantly try to eat Mr.Froggy?
Cinder Smile got back up on her hooves and leaned out into the hall to check the time. She had a very important meeting with another family at.... Four thirty! She immediately exited the room and galloped down the hall, leaving the other three confused at her sudden exeunt. The couple looked at each other, then down at Twilight. "Four thirty?"
Then, they heard the sound of galloping through the halls and Cinder burst through the door a second time, looking more exasperated than ever. "I'm sorry but I have to go and you have to talk to the pony about leaving but then it's okay and if you ever ever need help in any way possible you can contact me easily but I have to go now and remember to take good care of Twilight I know you will she is a very cute filly I just wish I could spend more time with her it has been such a wonderful time getting to know her more and playing and"
Twilight Velvet and Night Light simply watched as Cinder rambled on nonstop, the latter holding back laughter. She eventually concluded her rant and waved, already halfway through the hall.
"Okay, byeee!" Night shouted while Velvet waved.
They turned back to Twilight who had occupied herself with searching under and around various furniture for whatever reason. "Twilight, I am Twilight. This is my husband Night Light."
Twilight gave Twilight a suspicious stare, who responded by smiling back at Twilight. Twilight couldn't be Twilight, she was Twilight!
"Twilight?" Night Light said, breaking the stare-off. Twilights looked over and he chuckled at the scene. Twilight rolled her eyes and ruffled Twilight's hair.
"I should probably say I'm Twilight Velvet. My apologies Twilight."
... Twilight would find out this mare's real name later.
"Lets go Twilights!" Night Light remarked, getting a deadpan glare from Twilight Velvet, and curiosity from other Twilight.
They strode through the adoption center, turning every which way until they arrived... To the conclusion that they were lost. Twilight Velvet was becoming stressed, looking around for any places she could remember. In all the anticipation, neither had been observant enough to accurately remember their way back. Twilight Velvet slowly began breathing heavily, her heart rate accelerating. This was bringing back very bad memories. Night Light, however, noticed her distresses and embraced her, comforting her.
Night Light let go and glanced over at Twilight, who was smiling at the two. "Do you know which way is out?" He asked. Twilight smiled wider and started trotting back the way they came.
She knew the way out, it wasn't that hard to remember. Wait, what if these ponies were testing her?! Oh no, what if she didn't pass? Twilight nervously looked back at the couple, and noticed Velvet sweating a little, while Night Light winked at her.
Bad sign! They were testing her and the impostor was afraid she would pass, because if she passed then the real Twilight would get to stay and the impostor would leave, but if she didn't pass Twilight would be banished! Or possibly thrown in a dungeon, or even banished then thrown in a dungeon in the place they banished her to!!
She would pass the test and show her impostor she meant business. Twilight marched on through the halls, never braving another look back. After all, she lost points if she looked back. She arrived at the door to the main lobby, then turned around and saluted Night Light and... Her.
Night opened the door revealing a bored unicorn behind the counter pushing a pen around. She perked up as they entered, and recognized them immediately.
"Oh it's great to finally meet you!"
She knew them?
"Twilight is such an adorable filly, and she's lucky to get such great parents. You may take her home"
Already? Was it really that easy? Yes!
"Just fill these out, then we need to discuss the adoption."
...oh.
Five hours. Night Light glanced at the clock for the fiftieth time. Six minutes had passed by. However, he never became bitter about the situation, as he had expected this to take forever. Plus, it was his new daughter they were discussing. That made it loads of interesting. Too bad only fifteen minutes were spent on that matter the rest is legal, medical, blah blah blah. My wife, Twilight Velvet, seems to be unfazed. I frankly don't understand that.
Oh look it's been another 6 minutes. I hope Velvet is listening, cuz I sure as hay ain't.
"Free!" Night Light shouted to the streets, causing a few ponies to give him amused side glances. Twilight and Velvet followed him out, the first giggling and the latter just smirking. Twilight left Velvet's side and went over to Night Light. He smiled down at her as she nuzzled his leg. She knew what was happening now. The nice pony who always wears that funny shirt had told Twilight about everything and why it was happening. Everything except the pink and white one's name.
Twilight trotted off in a random direction towards who knows what, she just wanted to explore.
"Home is this way honey." Night Light called out.
"We don't have to go home yet" Velvet said. Her husband chuckled and agreed. They both began following Twilight through the streets...
Daw, so cute! Twilight's going to get a good home.
Cuteness overload! Cuteness Overload! Hnnnnnnng!
Very cute chapter, I hope to see more soon.
Reminds me of the episode "It's About Time."
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Shattered: Sir, our plan has worked. This story is invoking heart attacks just as expected. Soon, WE WILL RULE!
Crystalline: Goood... Goood...
And yes, those names do mean something >:)
Anyways, thanks! Ribbit.
3564161 Your welcome.
Also:
Rhetorical question: What are you up to?
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Nnnnnnnuuuuthinnnn.
And I'm certainly not going to shamelessly advertise, and I definitely won't message you when it comes out if you want.
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Hmmmmmmmmmm. I wonder.
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Seriously though, it's gonna be cool.
Ya know... we can just refer to the older Twilight as Velvet.
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I know, I was just having fun with the names
When are we gunna meet Spectrum!?
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Ummmm who's he? XD
Spectrum's that dude with the cyan coat... we see him in Rainbow's flashback from Games Ponies Play when she's looking forward to Cloudsdale hosting the Equestrian equivalent of the Olympic Games, but becomes disappointed when it doesn't happen.
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I thought that it was the guy with a rainbow mane and purplish coat she was standing on, but next was a cyan mare.
Anyway, thanks :) I'll go study that episode.
To answer your question: I'm planning something soon.
No I didn't just think this up now, I just didn't know their fan-accepted names.
After all, she lost points if she looked back.
That part just made me giggle so much, she is coming up with imaginary rules for an imaginary test.
Or possibly thrown in a dungeon, or even banished then thrown in a dungeon in the place they banished her to!!
EXACTLY what twilight thought would happen to Flutter Shy becuse she took Philamina without permisson in "A bird in the hoof" (e.22 s.1)!
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She hasn't changed a bit
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I do have one question. Will we see her BBBFF, Shining Armor, in this story?
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Of course!
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Yay.
I mean:
I mean:
Too much?
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*removes ear plugs*
No worries ^_^
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So sorry.
I wonder if he will be adopted like her or is naturally Velvet and Night Light's son. It would be funny, and a nice twist if Twilight Sparkle is actually the older sibling, making Shining Armor her LBBFF.
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Heh, funny, yet very hard to explain XD
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Wait, which part?
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Explaning how he is younger, yet clearly larger
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Yeah, that would be challenging.
3584849 genetics?
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Still it would be funny to have a reverse role of the siblings.
Update?
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Honestly, I've lost interest. I always look down on my own works, considering them crap that doesn't deserve to be completed and should be torn off the site.
With that said, I am still going to force myself to complete this story, along with The Shimmering Truth.
I'm more of an editor than an author, please excuse my lack of content.
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Yay
And it's okay.
Well, I'm okay with how this is going I guess, though I'm still peeved celestia didn't keep twi herself. I thought that was where this story was headed at first
While it's true every story will have little errors, this biggest hiccup I've found seeing as you called him Night Light several times earlier in the chapter.