It's quite the regular Friday, until when I walk out the door, I notice that the sky is flashing pink, and I also smell the sweet smell of fudge. I then find a girl, passed out in a forest, and bring her home, where only more questions arise... Who is she, and how did she get here?
This is the story of Applejack in the Ponyfall collab project. Click Here for more information.
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So far so good but what is this collar project? It sounds neat
344764 Roughly 23 authors are working on PonyFall.
The idea behind it is that most of the ponies (and a few "other" creatures) from Equestria get sent to Earth in human form. They are each discovered by one of the 23 authors, who then has to deal with whatever shenanigans occur. There is more to it than that, but I don't want to reveal spoilers.
Some of these stories will intertwine, as various characters from one fic meet those from others in the PonyFall series.
I'll be writing for Pinkie Pie and Futtershy, and they will end up in Australia. There's already a Discord fic out by Draequine here.
There is also a fic with Octavia by Sexy Frog here.
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Now this does look interesting
Holy shit...just...holy shit...shit...just...holy shit...tracked...thumbs up...not favorited though...I only favorite trollfics and clopfics...good job...tracked...thumbs up...untracked...retracked...loved it...Good day to you sir...
tracked, this looks good Belgian, third fic done
(oh yea Belgian, can I have your opinion on this?) Should I do my fic in first or third person?
(I might as well change it to first, but what do you think??)
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Third person is probably better, since it's easier in my opinion. In first-person, you often have to deal with the fact that you cannot know what the others are thinking, while in third-person, you can portrait their thoughts way easier.
At least, that's my opinion on the matter. But once you make a choice, stick to it. Don't start changing viewpoints.
Good luck :)
346013 oh okay, thanks!
(I was doing third person anyways because it was easier, so I guess I'm going to stick with it and thanks for the good luck! and you too!) :D
THE PONYFALL SAGA HAS BEGUN EVERYPONY. WHO KNOWS WHERE ITS AUTHORS WILL TAKE US? EITHER WAY IT'S GOING TO BE ONE HELL OF A RIDE. GOOD LUCK TO YOU ALL.
Nutella, the spread given by the Gods. When the Israelites exiled God rained manna upon them. Well, screw that; when I ever get exiled I want a Nutella rainstorm.
Looking good so far, I like how you're dealing with the "teaching how to be a human" thing. Even though maybe it's better as it is, you probably should have included Andrew teaching AJ about clothes. I'll just suppose you did that in the "teaching session".
Can't wait to read how will this continue! Maybe I should track the other PonyFall stories as well...
344804 If I can get in on it, there will be more Australian ponies. Well, probably only one.
Hmm...Looks...Interesting. This is about the third one I've read so far, and they all seem to be pretty good. AJ trying meat for the first time should be funny.
It's a rather interesting story the nutella made me lol.
Moar.
That Nutella thing was funny.
FIRST! I loved this chapter.
"Being the Element of Harmony, she was a terrible liar."
Dafauq?
382544 I think he meant the element of honesty.
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I know.
Man this collab is awesome, can't wait to see more of this
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Thanks for pointing that out, edited. And yes, it was supposed to be Honesty
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Hehe no problem! Got a ETA on the next chapter?
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At the very latest next week, I try to get out at least one chapter every week. Thanks for the interest
A bit rushed, but you explained the pink skies.
So jelly right now.
I wish I knew how to write a good story so I could have wrote one about Applejack.
A decent Ponyfall story. Happy me.
>Punctuation - Check it, please. Every time you end a sentence without a full stop, I have to stab a small kitten to vent my rage.*
>Dialogue and new lines - Indent, or space out the dialogue a bit more.
All in all, it's a story which is making me want to hit something a lot less than I expected. As in, it's actually comfortably contending for a seat in the "good" section of my mind, and it could even make it to "Exemplar" status if later chapters turn out like I hope they do.
*Note: I do not actually stab a kitten. That is cruel and should not be done. I kick a small orphan I pay to hang around when I feel I might be getting frustrated.
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I'm not a native English speaker, so I'm expected to make mistakes, but I know for one that punctuation should be paid attention to. So I'll be working on that right away.
Thank you for the compliments, the critique and the interest
Ich mag
Nederlandstalig lolololololol
XD
wel grappig geschreven.
Wel wat opmerkingen: waarom gebruik je niet de naam "Jack" gewoon voor haar? AJ vind ik wat maf klinken voor een boerenmeisje die geen Nederlands/Vlaams spreekt.
Verder vind ik die pizzeria veels te veel denken aan die ene uit Lady en de Vagebond.
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Your doing just fine, plenty of native speakers cannot write to save their lives.
On a side note, I don't blame AJ for falling asleep. That movie was very good but also exceedingly long.
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I know, but I am a great fan of old classic movies, and thinking about Applejack and her accent, I just couldn't resist with having show her an old Western. It was either that one or "Once Upon a Time in the West", and personally, I like the former better than the latter.
But, yes it is a very long, drawn-out movie, but a good classic nonetheless.
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Yeah, the "Old West" is easily my favorite romanticized period in history. Probably part of the reason that AJ is my favorite pony.
Another great one to show her might have been Wyatt Earp or The Magnificent Seven.
"The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly." Fine choice of movie good sir. Also great story so far. Really enjoying it. Keep up the great work!
>>Belgianchief
Nice bro, good to see a fellow Belgian brony
I'm from Mons...
But right I'm living in Australia;
If ya wanna type French, that's fine with me.
I was like... instant fave cause this takes place in my homecountry!
Nice chapter
btw this is definitely one of my favorites look forward to more.
Of the Ponyfall stories I've read so far, this one definitely takes number one in it's current content. They all have a nice background and story arc to them, but this by far has me laughing the most, especially with the antics at the Italian pizzeria! Too good my friend, keep up the great collab you and the others are doing, it's really nice!
i would continue reading it if it wasnt so poorly written.
Hmmm, interesting concept. And a Brony from Belgium is always a good thing (but Holland is better
). Maybe I will consider to also start a story. I think that Braeburn would like the rest and peace of my little village in Holland. The best ponies are sadly already taken but another apple-family member close by would be a nice thing for Applejack...
I like the pizza guy and his wife. there pretty awsome.
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They'll be coming back in the story later too, so be sure to keep reading
344764 i lol'd when i saw this cuz u wrote the first one I read.
I just read both chapters without pausing. I'm really liking this so far, perhaps because this guy (or you, I should say) behaves much like I would in such situations
FINIALLY! A ponyfall where they don't show up naked!
“What’s it called?”
“The Good, the Bad and the Ugly. It’s a classic western, located in the far west... Uhm... think of the scene around Appleloosa. It’s pretty action-packed, though I’m not gonna spoil the rest.”
“Sure.”
wait what was the “The Good, the Bad and the Ugly" ........ WOOO WOOO WOOO AWESOME MOVIE ALL OF MY WOO
Not bad... In fact, it's pretty good for a self insert so far. Have a mustache.
Hmm what word describes this... Oh yeah! Awesome!! Seriously though, great read. Moaoaoaoaor
It bothers me that he pretty much believes her right away
Better than the last chapter
This fic pleases my Belgian side
Brings back good memories of my last trip, visited Leuven and it's really a beautiful place. The neutella made me 
, and make a sandwich myself hehe.