It doesn't matter if you're the happiest person...
or an unfortunate weeper...
a powerful beast...
or a terrifying creature...
We're all equal in the eyes of The Reaper...

4370886 Well said my friend well said and that is rather good did you come up with that?

4370889 I copied it of off some other Reaper story

4370889 I don't remember the name though

4370894 :it sounded really good i would really like to use that on a certain part of this story it would fit perfectly with it but i better not

*Reading the description*
Use capital letters at the beginning of your sentences, for Celestia's sake
I'm not normally one to criticize too much, but that's pretty bad

4370954 I meant to fix that but i never got around to doing it thanks for the reminder. And i really don't mind critics

capitalize Creed, it's a last name therefore it should be capitalized.

Don't mean to be rude if it comes off that i'm trying to be.

4371019 Its cool

4370904 if you want you can use it, go ahead

Jesus Cryst kid, you need an editor or proof reader. If you don't have one, I am sure one of these guys would offer their help. If you DO have one, he needs to work harder.

Edited: So I barely finished the chapter and the ponies in the end seemed pretty docile to the human. Also, it's pretty cute how Sweetie Belle is somewhat one of the main characters.

Wall of text I could just barely make it through the entire chapter. Lovely story but seems way too docile for the ponies. Two things that need work detail and capitalization. Also please get a thesaurus it will help writing out a tonne.

Can you guys please cut back on the editing thing im trying my best to find a new editor so please tone it down some im having alot of trouble finding time to type the chapters as it is

4374054

Iight, I'm good with that. And awesome so far, dude. So, Sweetie is friends with the new reaper? nice. Anywho, Great story idea, I wanna see where this goes.

Would any of you guys want to edit the next chapter for me?

OMG I thought that rarity said to sweetie belle "show your guest your porn'' instead of it actually said

4376472 ?

Omg I'm so retarded

Lovin' it but you should get a proofreader.
No offense, your grammar is awful.

4377705 well thats just hurtful but i dont mind just please dont talk about the editing

4376017

I will, unless you already have someone. And I'll probably need computer access first. I'm on Playstation Vita.

4379183 ok im already done with the next chapter tell me when i can send it

4380441

I'll try tomorrow, okay? It's 8:04 pm for me, my mom has the computer, and I need to go to bed soon. This is my last week of school.

4380799 ok

4380808

Okay, I'll pm ya when I'm back from school.

I have to say that I like this story. It will be fun to see how the story go in the next chapters that you write. I do hope you have sum nice long chapter and they are out soon. So Keep up the good work you are doing.

Dragonfox

4395704 Thanks and as for the next chapter it will be out soon its in editing right now

Isn't it more appropriate to say that Marcus will "show the tone his junk"? XD he's doin well so far

Lol there's always a party :D

Her mouth dropped open and her eyes were wide her cheeks starting to turn red. It took me a minute to find out what she was looking at before i realized what part of me her face was level with. She was staring at my little friend down stairs.

"Oh my... you sure are... big" she whispered.

XD

Come on. Please, show us some soul reaping, or at least interaction with dead spirits. He is the damned grim reaper for celestia's sake.

This story is atrocious for spelling errors and grammar mistakes. You make a new paragraph every time a new person speaks. Say if Sam spoke first, but then her friend but then Sam spoke again it would look like this:
Sam said
Her friend said
Sam replied inquisitively.
Her friend asked, defensively.

You get the idea?

I was alone standing there in complete darkness. "Where am I... what is this place?" I thought. "am i dead?" "No, your not dead... not even close" someone replied. I slowly turned around searching for who ever the voice belonged. Then my eyes shot wide open as I came face to face with the figure that had spoken to me. I gasped in surprise at the sight before me. Standing about five feet away, was a tall figure wearing a long black trench coat, black silver buckled boots, black shirt, and a black fedora. The man slowly raised its head. My mouth dropped open. He was me. He had on the same clothes I was wearing, same hat and everything. It was like looking into a mirror. "What are you?" I asked my voice sounding more afraid then I had hoped. He chuckled at the question. A big smile spread across his face. I flinched at the sight of it his teeth which resembled that of a shark. Every one ended in a point and his eyes had no white to them. They where completely black. His pupils glowed a dark red as he continued to stare me down. I froze, my body refusing to move as if his eyes were holding me in place. Finally finding my voice, I shouted, "Who are you!?" He took a few steps forward closing the gap between us. He stopped about a foot away. I tried to back away, but my legs wouldn't listen. He leaned forward and stopped just inches from my face. "I... am you" he replied the smile still on his face "I'm the one you keep locked away in the corners of your mind. I'm the anger and the hatred you feel for others. I am... your demon and I think its time you let me out." Suddenly, his hand shot up and grasped my throat. His grip tightened every time I attempted to breathed. "You've kept me locked up for far to long" He growled his grip getting tighter. I clawed at his hand, trying to pry it from my throat but this just seemed to make him tighten his grip even more. "Now your going to be the one suffering" he yelled. I slowly started to close my eyes, my lungs burning from the lack of oxygen. My life slowly flashed before my eyes. I saw my first day of school. There, all the kids pointing and laughing at my bright white hair. Some called me old man, others pretended like it was blinding them. The scene shifted. It was the day of my parent's accident. I was crying as the cop told me that they had hit head on with a semi truck. The scene faded again, this time, i was standing on stage at my high school band concert. Everyone was applauding and cheering. I placed my cello in its case then turned and took a bow. I remember how nervous I was when the teacher had told me i was going to be doing a solo. I remember the joy i felt after walking off the stage hearing everyone cheering behind me. It continued like this for what seemed like forever but could have only been a couple of seconds. The last thing i saw was last night when i had took on that mugger. I saw myself attack him and him fight back. I watched as he kicked me in the nuts followed by kicking my face. "Wait a sec?" I thought. I quickly opened my eyes. The other me looked up in surprise. His eyes held a confused look. "You just refuse to die, don't you?" My lips shot up in to a toothy grin. This just seemed to confuse him even more. "What are you so happy about" he asked. I drew my foot back and with all my remaining strength to kick . His eyes shot down as he saw what i was doing but before he had time to react my steel towed boot slammed straight in to his crotch. I think i even herd a crunch sound afterwards. he fell to the ground yelping in pain his hand releasing my throat and cupping his balls. I chuckled as he lay the whimpering in pain while i caught my breath. I walked over to him, stumbling from dizzy ness. My head was throbbing and i could feel a migraine coming on as i stood in front of him. He looked up still in pain. 'You cheap shooting bastard" he yelled. I laughed at the insult before bringing up my foot and kicking him hard in the face. He fell back now clutching his face. Black liquid dripping from his nose and mouth. I walked over to where he lay and placed my boot on his neck pressing down. As i put pressure on him, his black eyes shot open. He grabbed at my boot trying to push it off but i just pressed down harder. He looked up at me fear in his eyes. Still smiling, I raised up my other boot causing me to put more weight on his throat. I herd a loud crunch as the bones in his neck broke. More of the black inky liquid poured from his mouth. Still smiling, i brought my raised foot down toward his face but before it made contact a bright light appeared out of nowhere. I fell back closing my eyes to try and block out the light. *beep, beep, beep* I slowly opened my eyes i was laying in a in a bed in what appeared to be a dimly lit hospital room. I looked down at my body several. iv's were stuck in my arms pumping them full of god knows what. Sighing, I laid my head back down on the soft pillow. "It was just a dream" i said to my self. It was all just a dream. How i got in the hospital, i don't know but i didn't care. I was alive. There was no reaper trying to kill me... no evil twin trying to choke me to death and no talking ponies. "YOUR AWAKE" yelled a voice out of no where. I jumped at the sound causing me to rip the i.v out of my arm. I jumped out of the bed searching for who ever had yelled. My eyes fell upon the lavender colored alicorn. "Dammit" i sighed it wasn't a dream. I was still in this wried world. I looked back toward the alicorn who was now blushing and looking away. "What" i ask. "umm..." she replied pointing at the gown that was hanging from one of the bed rails. It must have been torn off when i jumped out of bed. Looking down at my now nude self, blushing, i quickly grabbed the gown and threw it around me. "Okay, you can look" i said turning her head back towards me still blushing. I sat down on the bed and motioned for her to sit beside me. She climbed up and took a seat. "So..." i ask. "your a talking horse?" "Yes. Is there something wrong with that?" She replied looking a bit offended. "No no! There's nothing wrong with it... but its not exactly normal" i say back. "Well, your not exactly normal yourself" she said still a looking offended. "Were getting of to a bad start, aren't we?" "I would say so" she replied. "How about we start over" i say while reaching out my hand. "Hi. I'm Marcus creed. I'm twenty one years old and I'm human." Smiling, the alicorn reached out and shook my hand. "Hello, my name is Princess Twilight Sparkle, and I'm an alicorn." "I can see that" i said chuckling before i realized what she said. "Wait, did you say princess?" "Yes" she replied. jumping to my feet, i began to bow down only to be hit in the forehead by twilights hoof. "Ow" i yelled clutching my head. "What was that for" i ask. "Please don't bow. I hate it when ponies do that." "But I'm not a pony" I replied. "I don't care what you are. Don't treat me like royalty." "Well sorry your highness" i said in a hurtful tone. She looked at me with an apologetic look. "Sorry for being so harsh on you" she said with a sad look in her eyes. I staggered to my feet. "Its okay" i say before sitting back down beside her. "I just i thought, if i didn't bow you would cut off my head or something." "What gave you that idea" she said a shocked look on her face. "Well, that's what usual kings and queens do were i'm from." "That's horrible" she replied. "Well they don't anymore" i said trying to calm her down. "And where are you from exactly" she asked. "New York" i replied. "Where" she ask looking confused. "You know, Manhattan." "You mean Manehattan" she replied. "Mane what?" i said with a confused look. "Am i still in America" i asked. "Where" she said again. "You know. America, land of the free, home of the brave." "Did you hit your head or something" she said giving me a concerned look. "Where am i exactly?" "Your in Ponyvile" she replied. "And what country am i currently in" i asked. "Equestria of course" she replied smiling. I flopped back on the bed the sudden movement caused twilight to flinch slightly. "Are you okay" she asked. "I'm just trying to rap my head around this." I closed my eyes. Deep in thought, the bed moved a little telling me twilight had gotten off the bed. I thought back to the field that the reaper had chased me through. I shuttered at the thought. Then i remembered the door. The door must have teleported me here when i asked to go... somewhere safe. Then i remembered the white little unicorn. My eyes shot open and i rose up. "The white little unicorn that found me. Where is she" i asked. "You must mean Sweetie Bell. She's either at Carousel Boutique or Sweet Apple Acres i think" Twilight replied. "Is she okay" i ask concerned. "She's fine. Probably a little sore from all the running yesterday." "I was a sleep for a full day" i asked. "It felt like only a few minutes" "You where cut up pretty bad" she replied "You had a big gash going from your shoulder down to your chest after you saved me. Thanks by the way" she said smiling. "We picked you up and carried you here. The doctors didn't know what to do. They had never see anything like you before. We were all surprised at your recovery. It took only about an hour for your wound to heal." I reached up to my shoulder and felt where the scythe had been. There was a faint scar but the wound had healed up. I looked back towards twilight. "Can we go visit her" i asked. "Sure" she said "just let me go tell the nurse your awake and then we can check out she" said while walking towards the door. "Wait! one more thing" i said. She turned back towards me. "Yes" she replied. "Umm... you don't happen to know where my clothes are do you?" She chuckled at my question. "Over there." she pointed a hoof at pile of black clothing then walked out the door. As we exited the hospital i groaned as i examined my hat. It had been through hell. It was bent up and ripped in several places and my coat wasn't in the best shape either. The sleeve had been all but torn off and the other had a long rip down the arm. "You don't happen to have a needle and thread do you" i asked while putting my hat on. "No. Sorry" she replied. "But where going to Sweetie bell's house and her older sister, Rarity, is a clothing designer. "Wait. Ponies wear clothes?" i asked. "Well, not every pony" she replied as we walked past a fountain. I paused to look in to the water. I stared at my reflection i looked like hammered shit. My white hair was a mess. My clothes were not in the best shape ether. I looked like a hobo. Suddenly, i saw something move behind me. I looked close at the reflection what ever it was it was fast and coming straight for me. "Watch out!" I heard a voice yell. I turn around to see a blue rainbow maned pegasus flying straight for me. "Dammit" was all i could say before she slammed into me knocking the air from my lungs. We fell in to the fountain my head striking the bottom. I slowly raised up from the water. My eyes rolled around in my skull seeing nothing but stars. "Ow" i groaned looking down at the pegasus still sitting on my chest. She slowly lifted her head rubbing it with a hoof. As soon as she saw my face she froze. "What are you looking at?" i say causing her to jump off of me. "Twilight! What is that thing" she shouted hiding behind Twilight. "Yeah... nice to meet you too" i say before climbing out of the fountain. "Its okay Rainbow" said Twilight, "this is Marcus. He's a human." "A what?" the rainbow pegasus replied raising an eyebrow. "He says he is from a different world" explained twilight. "Another world? What so he's an alien?" "I guess you could say that" replied twilight. "Wow... he sure looks... different." the pegasus replied. "I'm standing right here" i say while trying to fish my hat out of the fountain without falling back in when suddenly, i felt someone grab my arm. I turned to see the pegasus hovering at my side while holding my hand in her hoofs. "What are you doing?" i ask with a confused look on my face. "I'm just looking at your... hands" she replied taking a closer look. "Well, stop it" i said before jerking my hand back. "your creeping me out" I turned to try and pick up my hat again when i felt her tugging on my jacket. "What now" i say before turning around my voice sounding annoyed. "What are you wearing?" she asked, "I've never seen clothes like this before." "Me either" Twilight claimed, both of them with a curious looks on there face. "Its a leather trench coat" i replied before turning back around and picking up my hat and placing it on my soaked head. "Whats it made of?" asked twilight. "Its made of co........" i stopped before finishing the word. I turned to look at them. "Do you have cows here" i ask. "Of course! duh" the rainbow pegasus replied. "Do they talk?" "Yes" they said. "So... they're intelligent?" i say before being answered by another yes. "Well then it doesn't matter what its made of " "What is it?... Oh come on tell us!" the pegasus moaned. "Nope..." i replied. "Fine then. I have better things to do than sit around and argue with an alien. I'll catch you latter Twilight" she said before leaping in the air then flying away leaving a trail of rainbow behind her. "Okay... who was that" i ask turning to Twilight. "That's Rainbow Dash" she replied. "A bit cocky if you ask me" i say before walking over to stand beside her. "Yes. she can be that way sometimes" Twilight said. " But she's loyal and a good friend." "She seemed a bit rude" i said. "Yeah, but don't let her get to you. Now shall we continue our walk?" she said before starting down the street. I looked up one last time at the rainbow pegasus before turning to follow Twilight. We passe a lot of shops as we walked, all selling strange things things that didn't have anything to do with each other. We passed one shop called 'quills and sofas'. In what way do quills have anything to do with sofa? We also passed a lot of other ponies while we walked. As we passed one i saw it had a strange mark on its flank. It was quill laying across a book. I looked around at the other ponies. They all had a strange mark on there flanks. I saw two ponies run by me one was a chestnut colored stallion with the shape of an hour glass on his ass followed by a blonde maned gray pegasus with bubbles on hers. "Doctor! Wait up!" she yelled chasing after him. I stopped and turned to face Twilight. "Is something wrong?" she asked. I ignored her and walked around behind her. She blushed when she saw where i was staring. She too had a mark. How did i not see this her mark? It was a magenta pink six pointed star with another white one behind it surrounded by five mini white stars. "What are these" i ask before tuning my face away from her flank. "Oh, you mean my cutie mark" she replied. "Yes, that" i said. "Well its a mark that every pony gets when they learn what their special talent is" she replied. "Well, whats yours supposed to mean" i ask. "My special talent is magic. she replied "wait, you don't know what a cutie mark is?" she said with a curious tone. "No" i said, "we don't have those where I come from." "Well... how do you know each others special talent?" she asked. "Well most of us really don't care" i replied. "Well that seems a bit harsh don't you think?" said twilight? "Its a harsh world were i come from" i said back. After that our conversation ended. We just kept walking every pony we passed giving me strange looks but i just ignored them i could care less what these ponies thought of me. I sighed and kept walking. I was starting to become annoyed the colorful town was giving me a head ache. "So where dose Sweetie Bell live?" i asked trying to brake the silence. "Not far from here" twilight answered. "We are almost there." I was about to say something else but was cut off by someone. "Hey Twilight!" yelled somepony with a hick voice "Can i speak to ya for a second!" She stopped talking when her eyes landed on me. She started backing away slowly. It looked like she was trying to hide her face in the big cowboy hat that was sitting on her head. I couldn't help myself, i started to laugh casing the cow mare to flinch and Twilight to give me a confused look. "Whats so funny?" Twilight asked still confused. "She's... she's wearing a cowboy hat" I managed to say before i started laughing. "Again, i don't get whats so funny?" Twilight replied. "A pony wearing a cowboy hat. Doesn't that seem a little strange?" I chuckled She just looked up at me raising an eyebrow. The country pony finally spoke up. "There anit nothin wrong with me warin a hat!" she yelled. I just laughed even harder. This seemed to make her even more mad. She then spirited forward charging at me but was caught by Twilight's magic soon after. "Applejack! Calm down. He didn't mean it" Twilight said trying to calm the country pony down. After i finally stopped laughing i walked over to the cow mare and bent down so i could talk to her face to face. "Sorry about that" I chuckled. "Its just I'm not used to seeing things like this" i said before reaching out my hand. "Truce?" i said. She reached out her hoof. I grabbed it before she could shake however she socked me a right hook causing me to fall flat on my ass. "Applejack!" Twilight gasped before running over to check on me. I waved her away. "No... i deserved that" i said sitting up. "Darn right ya did!" Applejack replied. "I said i was sorry" i grumbled. " I don't care if ya are" Applejack replied. "You just don't go around making fun of ponies. Its not nice." "Well, as you can see" i said while climbing to my feet I'm not a pony." "Yeah, i noticed" she said before turning to Twilight. "Who and what is that creature?" Applejack asked Twilight. I just turned around and played with the hole the scythe had left in the shoulder of my jacket while Twilight explained everything to Applejack. after they were done applejack walked over and placed a hoof on my shoulder. "I'm mighty sorry for punching ya earlier. If i would have known what you've been through i wouldn't have acted that way." "No... I'm the one who's sorry for laughing at you" i said climbing to my feet. and besides the punch wasn't that hard" I lied. "I can make it harder if ya like" she said bringing her hoof back. "Again. No, that wont be necessary" i said flinching away. She just laughed at my reaction. "So what were you wanting to talk about?" Twilight asked finally speaking up. "Oh" AJ replied. "we need your help down at the farm. Two of the support beams in the barn broke. we were able to keep them in place but we don't think it will last for long. We were wondering if you could use your magic and help us fix it." "Sure" Twilight said before pausing. "Wait. I cant. I'm walking Marcus here to Rarity's so he can talk to Sweetie Bell and get his clothes fixed." "But Twi! We really need you right now!" Twilight groaned and lowered her head. she looked like she was trying to decide what to do. When her head shot up. "Pinkie!" She yelled causing both me and Applejack to jump. We turned around to find a pink pony with a puffed up mane ease dropping on our conversation. I flinched at the sight of her not expecting to see her. " Hi!" she yelled a wide smile spread across her face. "Pinkie, would you mind escorting Marcus to Rarity's house." "Sure, I'll take him." she said giggling. "Thanks Pinkie" Twilight said before running off with Applejack leaving me alone with the pink mare. I turned toward the mare with an awkward smile on my face. "So... who are you again?" I ask. "I'm pinkie pie!" she yelled. "I'm Marc-" i started to say but was cut off. "Your Marcus Creed. Your a human from another world who escaped the grim reaper and was teleported here." she said still smiling. "Okay... that's creepy." i said. "Whats creepy?" she replied. "How do you know about me?" i ask. "Because i overheard you guys talking silly!" "Oh, that makes sense" i said before turning to face down the street. "So... should we get going?" i say turning back to Pinkie Pie. "Why? Were are we going?" she said with a confused look on her face. I face palmed at her response. "You were taking me to Rarity's." I groaned. "Oh yeah" she said before bouncing down the street. I sighed and began to chase after her. We kept walking for about an hour. It was about one in the afternoon and the pink pony had never stopped talking since we met. She kept rambling on about parties cupcakes and pudding. She froze when she started on the topic, her eyes half open and her mouth watering "Are you okay?" i asked while raising an eyebrow. "Puuudding" was her only response. "Okay..." i said. "This is getting a little weird." I waved my hand in front of her face a couple of times trying to get her attention but it didn't work. I sighed to my self, "how did i get myself into this?" I sat down and crossed my legs while Pinkie just fascinated about pudding. "I just want to get to Rarity's... is that to much to ask?" i thought to my self. I suddenly had an idea. A slow smile spread across my face. I climbed to my feet and walked over to Pinkie. I bent down to her level then brought my face beside her ear. "Hey pinkie" i said my voice a low whisper. Her ear began to twich that let me know she was listening. "Twilight told me that there was pudding at Rarity's house" i said before standing back up. Her eyes shot wide open at my words. "Rarity has pudding!" she yelled before she took off trotting down the street almost knocking over a stallion carrying tow crates of apples strapped to his back. I chuckled at the sight before running. I will admit that pony could run. I had to stop a couple of times to ask the shop keepers if they had seen the pink pony run by. They never said a word. They just pointed in the direction she had went with a scared look on their face. It took me a while but i finally found her. She was pounding on the door of a shop. The sign read 'Carousel Boutique'. It was a fitting name considering the shop looked like a carousel. I walked over to Pinkie who was stood stiff pounding on the door. "Rarity! I know there's pudding in there! Open the door!"she yelled louder. "I swear Pinkie, there is no pudding." came another voice from behind the door. Pinkie just ignored her and continued to pound on the door. "Maybe this was a bad idea after all." I sighed. I leaned to Pinkie's ear again. "Pinkie. I forgot but Twilight said she was taking the pudding to Applejacks." Pinkies ears shot up before turning toward me. "So Twilight had the pudding all along, didn't she!?" I chuckled and shock my head. "Yes." With that pinkie ran off toward the edge of town faster then she was running earlier. I feel like I'm going to regret this later. I stood up and knocked on the door three times before i got an answer. "I already told you i don't have any pudding" i herd Rarity's pleading voice on the other side of the door. "Actually i was hoping I could talk to sweetie bell" i said while trying to hold back a laugh from the sound of fear in her voice. I jumped back as a blue aura surrounded the door before it slowly opened and the white, purple maned unicorn's head poked out looking around for the source of the voice when her eyes fell on i was about to raise my hand and wave but then she gave me a funny look and said, "What in Equestria are you wearing!" I looked at her with confusion. She used her magic to trying to pull my tattered coat, along with me, in the shop. "What are you doing?" I said pushing her away. "Why darling, we just have to get that clothing off you. Its a crime to fashion itself" she said looking back at me. "Woah... wait. Before that, i have some questions about yesterday. You do remember.... right?" She stared into my eyes. "So you were the other unicorn that helped me yesterday aren't you?" She nodded at me in response. "Thanks" i said, "If it wasn't for you and Twilight, i might have died again." She looked up at me, a confused look on her face. "Pardon me but did you say you died...again?" "Yup, that's what i said." "So you died before..." she asked a concerned look in her eyes. "Its a long story" i replied "I'd rather not talk about it" i said as i lowered my head and stared at the ground. "Well were are my manners" Rarity said causing me to look up. "Would you like to come in?" she said motioning at the door with her hoof. "Sure" i said following her through the door. Twilight didn't lie when she said Rarity was into fashion. The store was filled with different fabrics and dresses, some of them even had jewels sown into the fabric. "Nice place you got here" i said turning back to the look at the unicorn. "Well, i try my best to make the place look presentable." she said smiling before stopping to stare at me. "Your clothes are a mess" she replied frowning at me. "Well, you try getting cut up by a scythe and still look as sexy as i do" i said closing my eyes while placing my hands on my hips. "That just wont do." she said before picking me up in her magic. I yelped in surprise as she began to remove my torn clothing. She examined each piece of clothing with a look of disgust on her face before releasing me from her magic. "Now," she said turning her face towards me "lets get you into..." she froze in mid sentence. Her mouth dropped open and her eyes were wide her cheeks starting to turn red. It took me a minute to find out what she was looking at before i realized what part of me her face was level with. She was staring at my friend down stairs. "Oh my...she whimpered" I quickly covered my junk and turned away. "Sorry..." i heard her say. "Its cool" i said trying to hide my embarrassment. I looked around for something to cover my self with. My eyes landed on a role of pink fabric. I walked over to it and rolled out a big enough size then cut it with a pair of scissors laying nearby. I quickly rapped the fabric around my waist then turned back to Rarity. She was still blushing. We stood there for a good minute before Rarity spoke again. "Would you... like a drink" she asked in a nervous tone. "Y-yes please" i said wanting to end the awkward moment. She then trotted over to the kitchen area. "What would you like?" i heard her yell. "Water would be nice" i called back. She returned a few moments later carrying a tray with two glasses of water. she carried them over to a big red sofa and motioned for me to sit down. I walked over to the couch, carefully not to let the fabric fall from my waist. Before sitting down, she sat down beside me then handed me my glass of water. I sipped at my drink not sure what to say. She picked up her glass with magic then took a small drink before sitting it down on the coffee table that stood beside the couch. I took another sip of water before sitting it on the table beside me. "So why did you want to come see me darling?" Rarity asked in her fancy voice. "Actually, i came to see Sweetie Bell. I wanted to thank her for bringing you and Twilight to help me. Is she here?" i asked. "Yes, she's up stairs." Rarity replied. "Sweetie Bell! You have a visitor." she called. "Coming!" called a voice from the top of the stairs. Then the sound of small hoofs coming down the stair. A few seconds later, the small unicorn walked in to the room. She froze when she spotted me sitting on the couch. I brought up my hand and waved nervously. I was surprised when she ran across the room and jumped in to my arms hugging me tightly. I smiled then wrapped my arms around the small filly. Then i felt warm tears running down my naked shoulder. I raised an eyebrow confused. "Why are you crying?" i asked picking her up so i could talk to her face to face. She looked up at me, her face still wet with tears. "I thought i would never see you again..." she said with sadness in her voice. "Your not getting rid of me that easy." I said chuckling. She smiled before leaning in for another hug. "Thanks for not dying." she whispered in my ear. "Thanks for not leaving me to die." I said returning the hug. I looked over to Rarity who was wiping tears from her eyes. She looked over to me and gave me a caring smile. I rolled my eyes and smiled back. Sweetie Bell finally stopped crying after about two minutes before sitting down in my lap. "Sweetie Bell, why don't you show our guest your room?" Rarity said before climbing off the couch. "Okay." Sweetie Bell said excitedly. "And while your doing that, i will see if i can repair these... rags." "Please don't put any sparkles on them." I said as Sweetie Bell dragged me up the stairs. "As you wish." Rarity said with a smile. I followed the white unicorn to the second floor of the shop which must be were they sleep. As we walked into Sweetie Bells room, she ran around picking up different things and bringing them over for me to look. It was kind of hard to hold all the items and still keep the pink fabric wrapped around my waist. After a while, she had finally shown me all her things. We took a seat on her bed we didn't say much we just sat there. I looked over at the unicorn. She was staring at my snow white hair. When she saw that i noticed her staring, she turned her eyes to my face. "Why is there hair on your head but not your body?" she asked. I laughed at the question. "Well, i do have hair on my body." i replied. "But it doesn't grow as thick." I lifted my arm to show her. She leaned in closer to get a better look. I grabbed some of the tiny white hair on my arm and pulled them up straight so she could see. "That's weird." she said before bringing her head back. "Its normal for humans to not grow a lot of hair on there body, although some of us did. I just thought they were creepy." i said chuckling to myself. Sweetie Bell looked up at me, confused. "Whats a human?" She asked. "A human is... well its what i am." i replied. I explained to her what a human was and told her what we had done in my world. The good and the bad. After i was done, she looked at me with understanding eyes before asking me another question. "So... was that thing that attacked you a human?" "No." i said my voice went cold my expression went from happy to pure anger. "He was something else..." "What was he?" she asked in a curious tone. "In my world, we called him the Grim Reaper." I replied. "We saw him as someone who would carry souls to the after life." "After life?" she said confused. "When humans died, he would come to take care of our souls. He was supposed to take those who were good to heaven and those who were bad to hell." "Whats heaven?" she asked still curious. "Heaven is were all the good souls in my world would go after death. Its an ever lasting Paradise but hell is were the bad souls go. Hell is a place of never ending torture and punishment but the reaper wasn't doing his job. He kept the souls to fuel his power. I heard their cries for help when i fought him." I flinched at the memory of the cries of pain trapped in the darkness. "So no... he wasn't human." Sweetie Bell was about to say something but was cut short by Rarity calling from down stairs. "Sweetie Bell, dinner is ready and Marcus darling I'm done fixing your clothes." "Yes!" i cheered. I was getting tired of wearing this pink man skirt. We both rushed down the stairs. Rarity stood at the bottom holding my outfit in her magic. I ran over to grab them. She handed them to me then released her magic. They fell into my hands with a flop. I quickly looked over my trench coat. All the holes were gone, there wasn't even a sign that they existed. I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around to see Rarity holding my hat she had fixed. It too yielded no trace that any damage had been done to it. "Thank you." i said before bending down and hugging Rarity. She flinched at my action but relaxed a second later. "It was nothing." she said blushing. "But i am curious about one thing." she said. I released her from the hug then looked up confused. "Curious about what?" i said. "What exactly is that coat made of?" she said raising an eyebrow. "You really don't want to know." i said standing back up. " oh, but i do." she said. "I would love to make some outfits from that fabric." "Trust me," i said "you really don't want to know." I looked around for Sweetie Bell to try and cause a distraction but she was already in the kitchen. I slowly started to back away from Rarity witch was a big mistake. The pink fabric around my waist was caught on the railing of the stairs causing it to be pulled from around me. I quickly stepped back to retrieve it but i stumbled on a stool causing me to drop my clothes once again exposing my naked body. I had whacked my head on the floor witch had rendered me dizzy. When i got my vision to stop spinning, i found Rarity once again staring at my down stairs. I groaned in annoyance before picking up my clothes and walking around the corner. Rarity just watched my naked self stand and walk away. I quickly threw on my boxers and pants, then my shirt before pulling on my socks and boots. She had even shined the silver buckles on them. I then put on my coat. I walked back into the main room to retrieve my hat witch lay a few feet from the frozen Rarity. I walked over to her and picked up my hat. I then placed it atop my white, snowy hair. I looked at the white unicorn who was still standing there staring off into space. I was about to flick her nose when the door burst open causing me and Rarity both to jump. I turned to look at the pony that was standing in the doorway. My heart stopped and a large lump formed in my throat. In the doorway stood a messy maned Twilight Sparkle and she didn't look happy. I started to slowly back away shaking in fear trying to hide from the angry alicorn princess. "WHICH ONE OF YOU TOLD PINKIE I HAD PUDDING!!!" she yelled. Shit, i knew this would come back to bite me in the ass. I gulped before answering. "M-m-me." i said with fear in my voice. "Do you have any idea what I've been through!?" she yelled. "I've been making tub after tub of pudding just to calm her down!" I started to reply but she cut me off before i could say anything. "Don't say a word!" she yelled. "I don't want to hear your excuses!" She stopped when she saw me and Rarity, both backed up in a corner. I was holding Rarity in my arms and she held me in her hoofs. Twilight seemed to calm down a bit when she saw she was scarring the living shit out of us. "I'm sorry..." she said in a calm tone. "Its been a rough day." I released Rarity and stood to walk over to Twilight. Rarity just stayed curled up in the corner not daring to move. I knelt down beside twilight before wrapping my arms around her. "I'm sorry for putting you through so much trouble." i said trying to make amends for my actions. "Its fine..." she said."I think i will just go home." She paused for second, then looked up at me. "You still don't have a place to stay... do you?" she said. "No." i replied. "He could stay here." i heard Rarity say from the corner. I shivered at the thought. "Don't get me wrong. Rarity is a good pony and a good friend but i really don't want to stay somewhere with someone who cant get enough of seeing me naked. Actually," i said turning to Twilight, " I was hoping i could stay with you." "That wont be a problem." she replied."Then its settled." she turned and walked out the door. I stood up and waved goodbye to Rarity then gave Sweetie Bell a quick hug before walking out the door. I had to run to catch up with Twilight. She still seemed a little angry about me telling Pinkie Pie she had pudding so we just walked down the street in silence. It was about seven in the afternoon. The sun was setting and all the shops had pretty much closed up for the day. We kept walking for a while. Neither of us said anything till we turned one corner. I found myself staring at a massive tree that looked like it had been turned it to a house. "There it is" Twilight said smiling. "Y-you live in a tree?" i said in a confused tone. "Its also a library" she said as my mouth dropped open. "You live in a library?" I asked. "Yeah"she replied. "Why?" i asked. "Because i love books." she said back. "Do you like to read?" she asked looking up at me while we walked. "Actually, yes i do" i replied. "Really!?" she said in an excited tone "I'm a big fan of horror stories but i absolutely hate romance" i said in a disgusted tone. "I like almost every type of book I can get my hooves on" she said still smiling. We had reach the front door. Twilight grabbed the knob with her magic then swung it open we stepped in then turned on the lights. "SURPRISE!!!!" the sound causing us both to almost jump out of our skins. I looked around to find the whole place filled with ponies all wearing party hats and all of the standing around a big table with a giant cake in the center. A banner hung from the walls that read, 'WELCOME TO PONYVILE MARCUS' in big pink letters.

this is what happens when you don't separate the paragraphs and I love it.