Life is a game, you just need to know how to play it. I learned it the hard way, even if not in the World I was actually born in.
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that was awesome and you did starlight very good i really like how this story is going
One Punch Man Workout...? One Punch Man Workout...
I'll say you portrayed Starlight as realistic as you could, and that you did so wonderfully. Her character is rather fascinating, and the destruction of the world she built for herself I felt was rather well done. Great chapter all around, I cannot wait to see what comes next as we move close to Starlight getting her dragon treasure. Although I do wonder if the mane 6 will meet with Moony's group soon. As the group gets larger, I can't help but imagine a 6v6 fight. Keep goin and stay golden^^
It was beautifull, the feels, the fight, the storyline, the fuck canon mindstream. I honestly can't understand why it's not more popular.
Ps. You are a machine with your writing pace. Keep it good and coming.
Great job on this chapter bub.
love the conversation between moon dancer and starlight, felt very realistic and the emotions and reactions, now you just have to make certain she stays unevil as right now she is unsure enough that one bad day may make her change back.
I will say that your charactation of Moondancer is interesting as while she does come off as being an SI, i keep getting the feeling that the origional moondancer is effecting her somewhat and that everytime she preempts one of the future villians into beng her friend she is going to be going, "take that Twilight, This is what a princess of friendship should be like"
your work outs are starting to get a bit ridiculous, what next, will you start bench press houses, before moving on the mountain :)
Them Fate skills
With how much value Moony-Chan puts in magic theory and the power of her followers I could imagine her creating something like the Cursed Seal of Heaven or the Dark Mark.
> I could see her irises dialing at the last part
Ring ring ring ring ring banana phone...
> I could see her irises dilate at the last part
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And soon moony goes on to create the holy grail war which connects with the throne of heroes in an attempt to get home