• Published 29th Sep 2016
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Game Over... - Zaralann



Life is a game, you just need to know how to play it. I learned it the hard way, even if not in the World I was actually born in.

Comments ( 192 )

Another name for Monster encyclopedia is a Bestiary

7651927 Okay!:scootangel:
7652169 Fixed, better?:duck:

7652196 how about [spiral Mana Arrow] and its variations:scootangel:

7653422 Seeing positive Reviews makes me write faster.:raritywink:
7653513 Hm... Hint: Watch Bleach's 12th OP and you'll see what I have in mind.

7662717 I'm I haven't seen bleach:twilightblush:

7662730 You should, it has it's stupid moments and the finale doesn't make any fucking sense, but the first half is actually very decent. Also, there is always YouTube where you can watch it.

7662799 well that's good:twilightsmile: so my favorite author when is the next chapter coming out:moustache:

Can't wait for an update! Also if your looking for something like The Gamer Re:Monster and World Customize Creator.

To Mr. Author:

"I must say in all my time spent in FIMFiction i have never found a story that kept me so enthralled and so immersed i jus couldn't stop reading and was anxious to read the next chapter as this one.
I just wanted to let you know I absolutely love this story"

Thanks, Darkwhip, signing out!

7662871 hey my favorite author when can I expect the next chapter 2 come out also I got another spell in mind for her [Mana absorption] it's a spell that absorbs all Mana from the enemies and environment around her also there's another spell called [multi casting] where you can cast more than one spell at a time

7665392 Soon...:rainbowdetermined2:
7665797 1. Thanks, it's nice to be appreciated.
2. I'll look into those later, and I already talked about the first one.
7666130 Good to hear!
7668327 1. Soon...:rainbowdetermined2:
2. Well, here is the Hint: Tirek.
3. Ehhh... Why would she need something like that? She can use Skills and as long as her concentration allows her she can use as many as she wants.

7670056 I just can't wait I'm excited are you excited but I'm not as excited as when I found this fic but how can you compare to that cuz I was all like(:pinkiegasp:) and then I started reading and then I started trying to help and then here we are and we have lots and lots of friends:pinkiehappy:



We are friends right:pinkiesad2:

Comment posted by black night sun deleted Oct 27th, 2016

7670056 I downloaded an app a week ago and I just came across the spell for my mage that I think you could use its called [Arcane bolts] at level 1 it fires 3 bolts that does 55% of your attack power each and each time it levels up it does 5% more of your attack power each Bolt and every three levels it adds another Bolt to the attack I think that would be good for either week mob control or piling on the damage on one enemy so what do you think:pinkiehappy:

7680939
7670056
It's from the app Mage and minions you can have multiple Heroes I have two at the moment a mage and a warrior currently I'm working on my mage the most there's also a spell there called [singularity] at level 1 your character shoots a single orb and it pulls all enemies around it towards the center of the ball and does a constant damage of 110% of your attack power but it takes a huge amount of magic. I am basing the amount of Magic based on the time it takes to cool down and the level that you unlock for example [Arcane bolt] takes one second cooldown in the level is between level 10 and 15 while [singularity] takes 40 seconds cool down and you unlock it at level 60 in the app. The Mages at level 19 so I don't have Singularity yet but since it shows you a bunch of the Spells before you can get them I figured why not give you some ideas is actually really fun game the mage is called Chara and the warrior is black light Sun

7680993 mass effect 3
but it sounds like an cool game that app

7680999 I stumbled upon this app by accident searching for an RPG app that I could play that looks like it could be fun and I have to admit it is fun most of the apps that I try out usually get really boring after a while Summoner war was one of them. I mean that it's okay but you usually have to spend money to keep yourself interested so I looked for one that I could play and not have to spend money just to stay interested I recommend this app if you get bored pretty easily with games that you have to spend real money to get special items in the game, also [Arcane Bolt] looks like a ball of Mana with a etherreel tail coming out the back

:unsuresweetie:7670056 are you alright you usually have commented on some of us by now I hope you're alright and comment whenever you get the chance

7670122 1. Deep breathes, clam down.:twilightsmile:
2. Yep, Friends is what we all are!:pinkiehappy:
7680323 Sorry, but it's too Wizard for Jessica to actually create.:pinkiesad2:
7680939 Yeah, and I don't do Wizards.:ajbemused:
7680993 The only problem is that I have no fucking clue how to actually create something like that, I'm going to stick with simpler things for the time-being.
7680999 Agreed, but it looks more like something from DotA.:ajbemused:
7681014 I don't really play any App, they usually end up with the need of too big investments to actually be interesting.
7682434 Sorry, was on SB, writing my Worm/WoW Story, now I'm back!

7695631 1. Agreed.
2. I added the description into the Character Chapter.

7695801 1. How?:pinkiegasp:
2. Thank you!:pinkiehappy:

7695508 1.Fluttershy voice: yay friends:yay:
2. She could always get it as a dropped skill
3. And if you want simple things why didn't you just say so I could probably look up a couple of simple spells for you

7695936 Thank you, I will!
7695941 Moth of these things were pretty basic, and the cosmetic effects aren't that hard to accomplish.
7695996 Which part exactly?
7696114 1. :pinkiehappy:
2. :facehoof: No, I have a very limited list of what will be dropped and I'm not expanding it so she would be able to Cast a hundred small Spells that she will only use once and then forget about them.
3. Don't bother, I already finished the list of what I was going to let her learn and it will be Epic!:rainbowdetermined2:

7696251 1. Nah, Jess will still be herself and there isn't really any need to imitate his personality. What would be the point?
2. Yeah, Starlight is overpowered as fuck, this is actually the point as she was able to trade blows with Twilight and even technically win somewhat! Also, Twilight is Magically stronger than her, as is Sombra and Starswirls with the last one being even more Skilled.
3. Well, not Avenger, more like Strawhats.
4. They are growing, give them time and you'll see the awesomeness.
5. Yeah, I got that impression too each time I hear Starlight's monolog.
7696275 1. Glad to hear!
2. 'Tears in the Snow' are a work in progress.
3. 'Hail to the King' stumbled upon a roadblock... I and the guy who is helping me with the idea are at a disagreement, he thinks that I should write it in Equestria Girl Verse while I want it in the Equestria Verse. We're going to flip a coin soon, considering on each of our argument the other on finds a counterargument.

7696624 I have to agree with you there I figured she'd be at least in the triple-digit levels

7696624 You need to remember that Starlight is a Unicorn, while Jess is an Alicorn.
Also, Jess got a boost from her absorption of Nightmare Moon's Essence.
Also, this is a couple of years before Twilight would come there and even more time before the whole mess with Time-Traveling, so Starlight didn't train as much because of the lack of time and didn't have the same determination to grow stronger as she did in Canon.
7696629 Unicorn, not Alicorn.

7696678 hey are you going to try that gamer story I gave you:twilightblush:
Also can't wait for the next chapter this is my favorite story I also check it every day for updates

7696678 as you said Jess is an alicorn while Starlight is a unicorn, unicorn Starlight kept up with alicorn Twilight who by then had to have been in the 50 to 60 level so starlight's level had to be in the hundreds to be able to have the kind of b******* power to keep up with alicorn Twilight so you can see my disbelief that level 51 is Starlight level. That level is too low to be her true level I rest my case

7696921 1. Eh... You're overthinking things here.
2. Thanks! I'll make sure not to disappoint!
7697205 Okay, we have several misconceptions here.
1. You never thought that Twilight was of a lower Level than Starlight at the start of the Series? Twilight had a shit-ton of Mana but her Level was lower than Starlight's at the start of Canon, she also wasn't as hard-pressed and as determined as Starlight and therefore trained far less and was more into theory than practice.
2. After Twilight became an Alicorn I don't think she exercised and practiced enough to expand her Mana and sharpen her Skills, while Starlight basically tore herself apart with training to face Twilight and made herself stronger over the course of the Fifth Season. Twilight may have more Mana, but she far less Skilled and Experienced when it comes to actually useful Combat Spells. She also had to constantly use the Scroll to return back in time which also drained her reserves. This was Skill and Experience versus Power, so Starlight managed to get a draw purely because of that.

That was the best fight scene that I have seen in this entire book and is in my top 5 best fight scenes in books you did really well on describing how they fought how their attacks looked and how they were feeling and thinking the way you described Starlight was great and I can't wait for the battle with tirek it is going to be epic:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

7699017 I agree with you Jess's group vs. The Mane 6 would be epic I can just see it now the only 1 I think would be a problem would be Pinkie Pie because of her pinky since the others would be taken out pretty easily with Jess and starlight but Pinkie Pie she's the one I would look out for she's the anomaly she can do things that she shouldn't be able to freaking do she's Pinkie Pie and logic does it work on her if I didn't know any better I'd say she has chaos Magic but she wouldn't be able to use the Elements of Harmony if she did

7698956 1. Thanks!:pinkiehappy:
2. Good to hear that I didn't screw this over.:twilightblush:
7698991 Honestly? Jess just didn't know any other workout than that and decided to not invent a bicycle.:twilightsheepish:
7699017 1. Thanks! I was actually trying to figure out how it looked like from Starlight's point of view, it wasn't that hard to see but actually describing the whole thing was borderline torture.:twilightblush:
2. It will be Jess who will get the treasures, remember?:applejackunsure:
3. What fight? Jess won't be confronting them anytime soon, it will attract Celestia's attention and that will be borderline suicide.:ajbemused:
4. Thank you, I will!:twilightsmile:
7699026 1. Thanks, fighting scenes aren't my strong point, so I was afraid I screwed up there.:twilightblush:
2. ... Do you remember that Tirek is still in Tartarus and won't be able to fight back with him being a borderline mummy?:ajbemused:
7699046 1. Yes, six civilians with no actual combat training would be able to handle an Alicorn... I'm pretty sure that they will bow down and prostrate themselves so Jess will have an easier time beheading their asses.:facehoof:
2. Can't disagree about Pinkie Pie.:ajbemused:
7699056 1. Updated her Stats.:twilightsmile:
2. They don't have it, they are Effect-Type of Artifacts.:ajbemused:

7699138 1. Thanks!:pinkiehappy:
2. I do too wonder why not so many people like it.:fluttercry:
3. I'm already on the next one.:rainbowdetermined2:

7699112 u-um you know I think I was better off not knowing her stats the fact that everything is a question mark scares the s*** out of me I wonder how she will take it

7699149 you're already on the next one!? :pinkiegasp:Dear God man how much caffeine did you drink to be able to keep on going like this or are you not in need of sleep:rainbowdetermined2:
[ the thought of a new chapter coming out soon fills me with determination]

What is The Gamer, and what does [SI] mean?

7699112 all type of equipment have stats
And all accessories have a type of effect or stat all weapons have a type of attack stat and armor has a type of Defense stat so the elements of harmony must have a stat they can be classed as a weapon or an accessory but since they do affect your enemies there must be stats on them

Comment posted by kitsunekit deleted Nov 6th, 2016

7699300 someone linked you to the gamer manga, but basically person life becomes an rpg and they are the main character. SI stands for self insert, meaning the author is dragged into the place where the story takes place

7699289 Like a Champ.:rainbowdetermined2:
7699295 Thanks!:pinkiehappy:
7699296 Nah, I'm just on a medical leave from work and have nothing else to do.:twilightsheepish:
7699300 [SI] - Self Insert
'The Gamer' - Korean Manhwa.
7699314 These do now, all they have are two functions:
100% Purification
100% Petrification
And they can also be used as very powerful batteries, that's pretty much it. They literally have no damage as everything that is Evil will simply be erased, no damage but a simple erasure of Existence.
7699342 ... Bad link.:pinkiesick:
A better one!
7699370 :twilightsmile:
7699421 1. Don't worry, they have it in the bag.:ajsmug:
2. Not exactly like that, she doesn't care about Twilight and just uses her as a point of reference because she was the one who solved all these problems in Canon. Also, Jess thinks that 'Princess of Friendship' thing is bullshit and Twilight's crappy view of the World should be corrected via a shovel to the face. There just too much Naruto in the whole thing to be healthy, the whole 'Think Like Us or Rainbow Cannon!' and their 'Resistance is Futile! You will be Assimilated!' shit kind of creeps her out.:pinkiesick:
3. She constantly puts a strain on her body, instead of working out longer she just adds more weight and specifically cheats with the fact that she doesn't need to fear torn muscles and would need to rest only thirty minutes before going at it again.:twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by black night sun deleted Nov 6th, 2016

7699431 what date what do you think would happen if the Alicorn Amulet was hit with the elements of harmony I think it would be either removal of the curse or the complete and utter annihilation of the amulet:moustache:

7699421 hey bench pressing mountains is Princess Celestia's light exercise to her that is as exercising us taking a light job

7699527 Nothing, it's not alive and it's not technically even Evil.
7699541 Amen to that.

7699549 but you did say The Elements of Harmony have a hundred percent purification so it could purify the Alicorn Amulet maybe:twilightblush:

7699629 It doesn't work like that, there is literally nothing to Purify as there is nothing Evil in it.
What do you think will happen if you will us the Elements on a pack of steroids? Nothing, the anger problems and addictive behaviour is all the user and not the Tool.

7699642 true but steroids don't have curses on them and the Alicorn Amulet does have a rather nasty curse on it and in Dragon Quest 9 you have to use an item called Saints ashes and Alchemy to purify cursed items so I figured the Elements of Harmony could be used to do same way:twilightblush:

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