This story is a sequel to Autophobia
*It is recommended you read the previous story first*
Cadance has begun to spend more and more time in the Everfree. She has had a couple of surprises here and there, such as a flying squirrel leaping past her face, or meeting Twilight as the purple Alicorn took a trip to the Princesses' old castle.
However, one day when she was particularly angry, she stumbled upon a small, hallucinating Changeling. She had reacted with a blend of hate and indifference, not giving the Changeling a chance to justify his existence. She had threatened his life and left him, crying and fearful, in the dust.
Looking back now, Cadance wishes she hadn't said what she said. He was a Changeling, sure, but mocking him for seeing things and claiming she would kill him for that sole reason was uncalled for.
Now, however, Cadance has the chance to make up for it, when she has another run-in with Changelings, two this time, and one of them is mortally wounded.
Preread end edited by me.
This is a really good story. Are you going to make a sequel to this story?
5450212 Maybe.
5450696 Hope you do.
5450771 It's definitely more open to a sequel than the story it was a sequel of. So that's a good thing.
Not much to say, other than Bravo! This was an excellent sequel, we couldn't find anything really wrong with this fic at all. Very entertaining, read it in one sitting.
5525198 *Cockney accent* Why thank you good sir!
This lends itself to a sequel too well, being as Greyscale is the same one Cadance threatend to kill. Please make maybe one or two more, flush out the reactions, and realize the world you have set up. Very good right now, don't stop.
5614784 Thanks for the encouragement; I've mostly been working on other stuff, so this suggestion really gets me motivated.
Glad you liked the story.
What a sequel! I really liked how you connected to the previous story with that final line. Cadance surprised me with that outburst at Shining but it all contributed to an excellent chain of events and characterization, also being longer you were able to fit in more content which turned out to make a great story overall.
Thinking of a sequel? It would be perfectly fine to leave as is but maybe something loosely related could come in the future?
5649195 YES MAKE A SEQUEL!
EXTERMINATE!
5661964 I thought you said you were a Rebel Dalek?
5661972 THAT WAS JUST A DISEASE!
EXTERMINATE!
THE DOCTOR FIXED IT AND SET ME FREE!
EXTERMINATE!
5661983 So like that one Dalek with the 12th Doctor, hmmm?
5662062 YEEEEEEES!
EXTERMINATE!
IT SEEMS PROPER DALEKS CANNOT GO 5 SECONDS WITHOUT SAYING
EXTERMINATE!
5662079 If you wanted to exterminate, wouldn't the entire fimfiction website be dead?
5662225 Eh. I keep the lug from killing. Until his birthday.
I LOVE MY BIRTHDAY!
5662246 Is that David Tennant?
That better be David Tennant!
5662320 Howd ya guess?
YOU SHOULD NOT KNOW THIS!
5662366 Thank God. (I know because he, as my favorite Doctor, occupies a special place in my brain.)
Hey I have a question for the two of you:
I'd say it's incredibly unlikely, but say that somehow, the Daleks managed to *ahem* exterminate all life within the universe. As in, ever. From the largest eight-eyed beast to the smallest single-celled organism, if the Daleks managed to destroy all life...
What would they do afterwards?
5662377 Thank you! I think you made him a rebel again!
WE WOULD MAKE A PORTAL TO ANOTHER UNIVERSE!
God damnit...
5662390 See, Dalek, the problem with that is, to make a portal to another time, another space, another dimension. you'd need like some sort of mutant supreme combination of TARDISes that would probably bend reality either way. Besides, we all know the Doc's TARDIS is the last one. When are you going to get the other ten million thousand?
I suggest that, if you still have to satisfy your crazy little murderous Dalek tendencies, get a hobby somewhere down the road so you don't end up exterminating one another. (Actually, that'd be pretty sweet...)
And Doctor, I must warn you:
Your eleventh life is gonna be occupied by someone who's nearly as awesome as you are, but your twelfth and final life will be in the form of a forlorn buttmunch who makes a terrible Doctor to begin with. Best of luck.
5662447 You misunderstand, this dalek has access to the TARDIS... That means it can get as many others as it wants. And hobbys? For this lump of metal? Actually he really loves halo... And thanks for the regeneration tips.
IM GOING TO SHUT DOWN... AFTER THIS CAMPAIGN!
5662503 Even so, Doctor, a portal to another universe? That would probably open a rift in space-time and mess up our universe as we know it... then again, didn't you accidentally kill the TARDIS once and travel to another universe where Rose was a dog?
Hey, Dalek, pal, what's your name? Are you seriously like named Dalek 15 or what?
5662563 Thats what I told him! He just won't listen!
MY NAME IS DALEK ZAY!
5662576 Okay, Tay Zonday, did you know that Cortana dies at the end of Halo 4?
5662610 YES!
5662653 And did you know that Master Chief has no eyes?
5662664 I read that before him and told him not to look.
I HATE SPOILERS!
5662669 I have proof.
Almost every Halo game has a Legendary ending Easter Egg.
Halo CE=Sergeant Johnson hugs an Elite.
Halo Wars=Anders goes into cryosleep, and Forge dies.
Halo 3=Chief goes into cryosleep.
HALO 4=YOU SEE CHIEF'S EYES.
5662693 ...
And now he's playing every halo mission on legendary.
I HAVE HACKS BITCHES!
5662718 He's quite a strange Dalek.
Oh, and quick question: Why isn't he able to exterminate you? Did you hack his armor, or...?
5662733 Im in his mind.
5662733 Dont ask how. Even we are confused!
5662765 You're confusing me, too, Doctor.
P.S. You do realize almost the exact same thing happens in your 12th life, right? A Dalek gets sick, you go inside his mind to try and make him see the wrongness of extermination, and all you do is make him go crazy and exterminate other Daleks.
5662799 Of course your confused! Also, coincidence much?
5662835 Quite.
5662872 DONE!
Well, I'm gonna hit the hay. D will be awake.
This neeeeeeds a sequel. I've reread this about 15 times now :D
5670227 I'm writing one; don't worry.
He-He-He-HELLO!
5839146 Malfunctioning?
You okay there, Zay? Should I call David?
5839153 W-W-W-W-WH-WHO?
5839165 David Tennant? The 10th Doctor?
Or should I take you to Skaro?
That's Doctor Who, thank you very much.
5839170 Y-Y-Y-YOU MEAN T-THE VOI-VOICE IN MY HE-HEAD? TH-THE ONE WH-WHIC-WHICH SSIOPAJPAIJHSODFH
Oh for god sake. There... There... and... There.
W-W-WHAT? W-wh-W-WH-WHO ARE Y-Y-YOU?
Call me... Discorded Doctor.
5839181
Doctor, what happened this time?
5839186 I didn't have to protect Zay because Discord tried going in his head and I stopped Discord corrupting him for no reason. Good idea.
HKAL.,J SIODPAJ SKJDALK WH-WH-WH-WHO ARE YOU T-T-T-T-T-TWO?
5839195
The one that keeps fucking up your head is Discord. He needs to be blasted in the face with your extermination ray until he ceases to exist.
The exasperated one with an English accent even though he's actually Scottish is the Doctor. He's trying to help you. Don't hurt him.
5839209 Hellooo~ I just had to mute them since they wouldn't let me say anything~