Thanks for the catch though! I took the time to run the entire story through Grammarly as well. It looks so much cleaner. While I'm here I'm going to work on some of Roseluck's more Mary Sue-esque scenes as well.
Damn, she apparently was in shock after Bon-Bon spent 200 bits on the flowers, because that's supposedly a large number, but then spent 300 bits in basically 2 days on G4M. Kinda feel bad about such pricing
5787818 Just trying to be helpful.
I'll give this story a read later book mark.
5787879 I appreciate all reader feedback. Thanks for giving my story a chance, and I hope you enjoy it.
Great Story! Keep up the great work!
great ! the next chapter ! and so quick !
keep going AJ Aficionado!
My favorite parts of the chapter are Lily's reaction to The Great Disaster and the interrogation scene with Daisy. Great stuff!!!!
5789263 This chapter has given me more trouble than anything I've ever written. I couldn't have done it without your help friend.
Another great installment!
Comma in between.
Huh, odd kind of thinking considering mares outnumber the stallions 5:1.
So, Tirek is present. I'll keep that in mind for my future iterations.
5890304 Huh, seems he deleted that line. I didn't see it in the story and Alt-F is only show one instance.
Poor Lily...
I think Daisy just might be my favorite
6630513 I was really worried about the Daisy I wrote being too vanilla. It's deeply gratifying to hear that I made her work.
If you really want to see her shine, check out Fertile Ground.
Just mind the fetish warnings...
Did Rarity ever get her whip back?
I'm loving this fic and the one before it you did an amazing job on them!
She slammed the front door closed.
She ran out the back door with the sheets to burn them. Then walked around to the front of the house?
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I'm just getting around to fixing this.
Thanks for the catch though! I took the time to run the entire story through Grammarly as well. It looks so much cleaner. While I'm here I'm going to work on some of Roseluck's more Mary Sue-esque scenes as well.
Damn, she apparently was in shock after Bon-Bon spent 200 bits on the flowers, because that's supposedly a large number, but then spent 300 bits in basically 2 days on G4M. Kinda feel bad about such pricing