It was certainly good for us! Nice vicarious sex scene there. Poor Rose, so hard-up for her distant Gentleman that she has to find solace with a cooler and the first-time lovemaking of her friend Lily. I'm also very flattered by all the references to my own work, Five Star Service. We'll have to introduce Rose to Five Stars someday...
Definitely looking forward to more, including Rosie finally bringing Richard home to meet the proverbial family! And their initial meeting with Blossomforth should be *interesting* as well...
5931925 Chapter Eight will bring back Richard, and yes he will meet the dysfunctional family. I think Lily will be watching the door to her room very, very carefully.
5936087 The story is moving in the direction of more relationship-related stuff and less of the cloppy stuff. It was a deliberate move on my part to sort of phase out the old story and bring in the new one. The idea to start from the the last chapter of TSoP through Roseluck's eyes was Firesight's idea actually and I loved it!
I'm glad I brought you around, and thanks for your comment.
5939582 Point taken, though G4M did have quite a few clop scenes in it -- almost every chapter. The genius was the mechanic of sex being driven by the main character's occupation. I don't have that benefit, so i can see where some of the clop comes off as forced. I'll grant you that chapter seven didn't really need to be so explicit. Anyway, chapter eight won't have clop in it, and will put what happened in seven into context. Thanks again for commenting.
5940520 Thanks for catching that, fixed. In G4M, you sort of implied the thestrals, but didn't go all the way. Firesight added them to Five Star Service, so I decided in my story they'd get some worldbuilding. I had a feeling you'd like it!
Nice chapter. Keep them coming.
It was certainly good for us! Nice vicarious sex scene there. Poor Rose, so hard-up for her distant Gentleman that she has to find solace with a cooler and the first-time lovemaking of her friend Lily. I'm also very flattered by all the references to my own work, Five Star Service. We'll have to introduce Rose to Five Stars someday...
Definitely looking forward to more, including Rosie finally bringing Richard home to meet the proverbial family! And their initial meeting with Blossomforth should be *interesting* as well...
5931925 Chapter Eight will bring back Richard, and yes he will meet the dysfunctional family. I think Lily will be watching the door to her room very, very carefully.
Oh, if only I could have a few more comments.
5936087 The story is moving in the direction of more relationship-related stuff and less of the cloppy stuff. It was a deliberate move on my part to sort of phase out the old story and bring in the new one. The idea to start from the the last chapter of TSoP through Roseluck's eyes was Firesight's idea actually and I loved it!
I'm glad I brought you around, and thanks for your comment.
awkward...
5939582 Point taken, though G4M did have quite a few clop scenes in it -- almost every chapter. The genius was the mechanic of sex being driven by the main character's occupation. I don't have that benefit, so i can see where some of the clop comes off as forced. I'll grant you that chapter seven didn't really need to be so explicit. Anyway, chapter eight won't have clop in it, and will put what happened in seven into context. Thanks again for commenting.
5940520 Thanks for catching that, fixed. In G4M, you sort of implied the thestrals, but didn't go all the way. Firesight added them to Five Star Service, so I decided in my story they'd get some worldbuilding. I had a feeling you'd like it!
This chapter earns it the thumbs up. The end to that final scene is hilarious.
Breakfast's gonna be a little awkward...
ok laughing to hard to type good chapter.
Hah. That must be awkward tomorrow morning.