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MidnightMare


Bringing tales of Midnight

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With Tirek defeated and having found her place as a princess Twilight Sparkle worries now that she can't live up to expectation worried about past, and future, failures.

To help encourage positive relations, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are sent to Saddle Arabia to celebrate the wedding of the King and his chosen bride, who very much wanted to meet the 'heroes of Equestria'

However that is just one reason for this trip. Princess Celestia has tasked Twilight and Discord of all ponies, to recover a treasure from Saddle Arabia, a treasure the King does not realize he has in his possession.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 6 )

I'll be back. ~Silver Spoon

5709420 I hope you enjoy the coming Chapters then :)

hm interessting ^^

Title:

The Mists of Midnight

Description:

With Tirek defeated and Having found her place as a princess Twilight Sparkle worries now that she can't live up to expectation worried about past, and future, Failures.
To help encourage Positive relations, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are sent to Saddle Arabia to celebrate the wedding of the King and his chosen bride, who very much wanted to meet the 'heros of Equestria'
But that's just one part. Princess Celestia has Tasked Twilight and Discord of all Ponys, to recover a treasure from Saddle Arabia, a treasure the King dose not realize he has in his possession.

Why is 'having' capitalized? Why is 'failures' capitalized? Why is 'positive' capitalized? The plural version of hero is heroes, not 'heros'. Why is 'tasked' capitalized? The plural version of pony is ponies, why is that capitalized also?

Characters:
An OC, not many people will like this.


I can already tell this story will have a lot of errors, and that's why it isn't like by most of the viewers. ~ Silver Spoon

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Oh, Thank you for your time in reviewing this :)

As for the awkward capitalization. When I write it all sort of comes out in fragments, so I capitalize when a new thought starts. I try to remember to go through and edit but I seem to have forgotten this time sorry

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