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Mark was out of his league, fooling around with an immortal pony princess, and he knew it. To make life easier for himself, he accepted that as a undeniable fact. She would get bored and he would move on. He just didn't know that the great vain mare was called the Subtle Sun for a reason. And that her enemies called her that as an insult.
Princess Celestia didn't have a subtle bone in her body.
Currently rated T but I might bump the rating as the story progresses.
Now a one-shot.
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YOLO.
Always Tuesday, huh.
Bottomline, though, Celestia is perhaps one of the most complex characters of any children's show in recent memory.
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It's safe to say this story doesn't suck. Infact I say it's not half bad.
But Tuesday of all days. That's definitely something I haven't seen before.
Overall this chapter failed to dissapoint and I would love to see what our poor protagonist is going to discover about his little 'get together' and how much longer it might last. Also discover why Celestia doesn't talk much to him seeing they 'get together' often.
(Also concerning your blog post about poor Celestia writing, I find your Celestia writing so far to be not half bad for this story as it makes Celestia seem different in a way I haven't read yet and also not being too bad at the same time. Neverless I'm pretty intereted how you'll portray Celestia and if your little experiment does pay off.)
I like HiEs that portray ponies as an alien culture, instead of having them act just like humans, so Celestia's magic courtship displays are a nice touch.
It may be because I'm tired, but this chapter confused me slightly. Can anyone explain what's going on?
Is Celestia stalling him deliberately because she fancies him or something?
6277349 I think the confusion might be on both sides. They don't even seem to be friends considering how they don't talk to each other.
It seems like they just find comfort in each other and Mark made a decision to stay and Celestia seems to want him to. There's a lot left vague with room for interpretation at the moment, gonna have to wait for another chapter to understand i guess.
Is it about how he got laid or is this his job, I can't tell.
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Then asnwer me this... WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE THAT FIC OF YOURS THAT HAS LEE TIMINGS RUNNING AWAY FROM CELESTIA, LUNA AND CADANCE!!!!!
This is intriguing and rather mysterious, as the others have mentioned.
I am curious and eager to see where this will go.
Well, this is interesting already. Now I want to see how it goes from here regarding her "rituals", their covert sexual partnership, and the feelings of both.
I can already tell there's a good deal of affection in what she does when the moon is high up.
Wow, Celestia is one complex mare in this series.
When will we expect the next chapter???
That chapter name...
I can't read this f in book, becauce i don't understand the best part of words from there.
this was good writing.
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