Vinyl has had feelings for a friend for a while now, and said feelings have started interfering with her sleep.
When she finally confesses her feelings, will she be able to face whatever the consequences may be – even if her heart must be broken as a result?
Written for a Creative Writing class, so if the pacing's off, that's why. I do not intend to fix or rewrite any part of this, but corrections will still be gladly accepted.
As much as I usually love unusual ships, this story is way too short, rendering it flat and emotionless.
6282560 i actually have a sequal I'm planning on putting up that should make up for that. Just not sure when it'll get up
Can't tell if I like this or not...
It all felt too casual... with Luna and everything.
Eh if you make a sequel I'll read it... if I see it that is... I hope I do anyway.
Eh I'll give a thumbs up with a ? On it. lol
6285207 Blame it on me being more reconcerned with getting it finished for my grade than any concern for quality – although it certainly doesn't help that I'm a grammar nazi and that I forgot the italics.
6285799 oh ok I see now!
Still better than anything I could make!
but still, Ill read the sequel when you post it!