Hello and welcome, I am The Forgotten Siren and I enjoy MLP and want to write good fanfiction for you all. I wish to keep this clean and start a new...hopefully
This story is a sequel to Sonata's Modern Life
High School is official over for everyone and Adagio has told Sonata to grow up and get serious with her life. So Sonata does just that, by getting a job and sharing a place with Pinkie Pie. Both random girls are enjoying the time they have living together as friends and doing friend stuff. But as time goes on, the find out that they really have strong feelings for one another.
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Not bad. I generally don't like lesbian mlp stories but this one seems like it'll be good, Good job!
Fun thus far, might benefit from a proof-reader as some of the grammar needs a bit of a tightening down. Having said that I enjoy the direction and the idea of using Fluffle and Chryssi is adorable. I look forward to more
PinkiNata?
It is not to my taste, but it sounds interesting
very good chapter
I hope to see more
then adagio and sunset are dating?
I should have known you would put Chrysalis and Flufflepuff in a taco shop. Great idea for a story.
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Thanks, but don't worry this will be a cute story, in other words no rule34
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Tes, Adagio and Sunset are an item. At the end of my last story "Sonata's Modern Life." I hint that they would get together.
6300976 I like the sound of that
could you make a little time with them
please...
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You mean making the relationship grow? I am already thinking that, but at the same time I have college on the 24, so I do want to try to at least get a good amount done.
6301084 it's okay
good luck
Yay you called her bacon head!
But bacon is for all of mankind!
very beautiful
especially the end
I love it this story
continues please
Yeeeeeah your TOTALLY not a couple then...
another very beautiful chapter
I love it
this story is my favorite on my list
continues please
6329975 Wow thanks, I honestly thought the third chapter was a tad weak compared to the other two. However, my next few will be much better and cuter
6330102 I know I will
you're a great writer
I couldn't stop laughing!!!!
Then I read this
I screamed in pain at the thought of it...please ease down on the ball squeezing it hurt me when you did it last chapter also
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lol ok
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thanks
beautiful
I can not wait to see what happens next
very good work
You said there were no races in mlp in your author notes but the races are unicorn , earth pony , and pegasi. They even fought over it in the past.
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no pressure just do what you like.
Also Rarity came along with apple Jack does that mean rarijack
6334470 True, but in the human world they are only the colors of the rainbow and then some. No black or white. Also, no Rarity and Applejack are not an item in this. I used Applejack to help Pinkie move, and as for Rarity, well she was to help organize.
Sharknado 1-3?.....That's my kind of movie night right there
What's next? Sand Sharks and Snow Sharks?
6336139 ....Sand Sharks...is a real movie lol. Along with two head Shark and Sharktopus vs whalewolf
6336215 I did not know about Sharktopus vs whalewolf, I'll look it up:)
Check out Ghost Shark by the way.
very funny
I've seen those movies are really bad
I liked the chapter
keep it up
Good Burger and Ed. Did I get it right?
I did...
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yes, glad so see those who knew Nickelodeon back when it was cool
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Been so long since I heard that XD
Are you making this of as you go?
I love Aria right now
6339838 What do you mean? I only seen Flufflepuff being quiet and nothing else.
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I know but your making up the actions as you go right? Because there is no way you would know what two blinks and a tongue out meant if you saw it...
They are talking about parents does that mean that there's going to be a parent chapter?
6339952 ok lol yes, I am making it up as I go. I'm playing Crystalis and Flufflepuff as Chewbacca and Han. You know, when Chewbacca roared, Han knew what he said.
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Truthfully, I am not sure if I will touch that subject in these stories. Reason being, it is to "real" and even when making this chapter, I didn't know if I should have published it or not due to how "real" it can be to some people.
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Yeah I recommend you either make a blog or comment so those people that had that problem if you should do that or not
I got no problem with the ship but I couldn't take it seriously, I kept laughing after everything bulk biceps said
Don't blame him at all...
Well everybrony, I got bad and good news. Bad news is this will be on Haitus. The good news is I start my third semester of college tomorrow. I'm not sure when I will be able to make a chapter, but please hang in there. You guys have been nothing, but great. I'm not in this for popularity or anything. I just wanted to share my stories with my fellow bronies and I hope you will enjoy my latest chapters when they come. Until then, stay pony my friends
Can't wait for more!
Keep this up. It is an awesome story.
I have to say that was a very beautiful story, and not to be rude but i think it's pathetic to marry yourself some people think that. Anyway love the story and can't wait what your new story will be. just let me know so i can add that one to my library
7018061 thanks, that really means a lot. And I'm thinking my next one is either gonna be the short dirtyv story or a sad Spike story
>> Poison Pinkie Pie Great i can't wait to read is you always make a great story
6330824 Yeah, that made my dick shrivel up a bit in fear.
This was cute!
I honest do not like people who think the way Pinkie's parents think.
7025936 I'm glad you liked my story. I just wish I had more time to stretch this ship even more. I wanted to make a story about the loss of Flufflepuff and what happened when Pinkie' parents found out. Also, I really couldn't make her mom and dad...into Kim Davis. I liked them way to much, to make them into THAT cancer. So I put in that they still loved their daughter and wanted to be apart of her life. Also, I hope I made the death bed scene sweet and sad. Like I sid, I feel like a rushed it to hard and it might not have the emotions I want it to have.
6339838 yeah, aria is pretty great
The ending hurts like hell to read. I think you rushed them to death way too quickly
7649411 I know I did... When making this, I started losing interest, but did not want to disappoint my followers, plus college stuff I had to do. In top of that....In honesty, I felt this was not my best work. Like it didn't have that touch like my first two stories did, that I am thinking of reediting to make longer and ad more details to them. I hope you still enjoyed this story and I will beaking another slice of life story soon.
Did you just reference good burger?
Yeah, this is a good story. Very well written.