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This is awesome. Please keep going.
7427476 I'll my friend just school and my second writing account may slow me dowm
Yay this is a awesome story i hope you write more soon update more on this story soon
So far so good
Try to keep The Videos out of The story it makes The story look bad (just some advice your choice)
7428850 OK I'll do that
While I think the premise has potential, I very strongly suggest getting yourself an editor or two. The grammar is not a small problem and needs some serious attention. Once that's out of the way, people can stop disliking it because of poor grammar and for other reasons that may or may not need a good explanation. Putting it in more groups is also advised.
7431675 Yeah I know, but I don't known anyone that would help edit this
7432515
Well, there's an entire group for that actually.
7432664 Really? Wow, thank you. Who are they.
7432665
Jus go to Groups and search 'editor.' There are more of them than I thought, so take your pick.
7432666 Thank you man. I owe you one for this.
7432670
Don't sweat it, it's not like I'm the one doing the editing.
7432674 True
You need to add a D in name.
You need a comma after that.
A comma after that.
You need a comma after that.
You need a comma instead of a period.
A comma after that.
It's written as 'too'.
Other than that, this was a pretty good start. Although you could have put that video in the author's notes instead.
when you speak of the type of demons should i reference doom for what they look like
Protip: Go for where the water hits itself, as you'll take significantly less damage from the fall.
Jesus, dude...
Get a editor...
You need one badly since the grammar is all over the place...