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I'm confused, if Luna thinks Celestia sees Heartless as a demon (even though she doesn't know what he looks like), why does she think Celestia is trying to claim him for herself?
7518761 In the show remember that everypony thinks of her as a monster. Heartless just showed that they're wrong and that being something very polite to Luna treating has she wanted to be treated. So Celestia thought Heartless would be the same with her.Despite her not liking demons. P.S. sorry for not updating soon.
I love this it is sooooo good. I swear its like a drug can not get enough.
Cant wait until the next chapter this story is really underrated
7521372 Hate to be a bearer of bad news, but I won't be able to work on a chapter nor upload one until I have WiFi for my tablet. Sorry, but don't you worry I ain't giving up on this story.
7522579 sweet I shall wait then.
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Um Paul what number do you pick from my author's note? 1 or 2?
7523252 I got me WiFi, but what number you pick 1 or 2?
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Oh, didn't even notice that part of the AN. Um, let's go with 1.
Nope, not picking either unless you tell us what they are.
7525892 I give ya a hint in a riddle.
A reliable creature that sticks by your side by birth to adulthood a loyal companion like a raised child, but a wild a d tamed mind. What is this riddle hint. Message me if you figured it out.
7526147 ...
7526240 can't figure it out?
7526245 I didn't even try to. If you're gonna decide something in the story based on a poll, you've gotta actually tell us what it's about, otherwise what was the point of giving a poll in the first place? And you aren't just leaving out the choices we can pick from, you're leaving out the whole damn question!
If the reason you're unwilling to share is due to potential spoilers that's fine, but without any actual insight into what we're voting on it essentially boils down to random chance, in which case you might as well just flip a coin or something instead of putting it to a vote.
Edit: This video explains my thoughts on the matter.
I'm Deep Thought.
You're the crowd.
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7526406 Thank ya for opening my eyes to see what ya mean and now I rewritten the authors note on why you're picking a number. It's a pet choice on who finds the pet and what the pet is.
Zeal doesn't really seem the type to go out often, but it would be interesting to see him finding a pet on of the few times he does. It would also add a bit of depth to a character the readers haven't spent much time with, so I guess based on that I would choose option 1. But then again, you said that this would be Heartless' pet regardless of who finds it right? In that case it would make more sense for him to find it, due to the fact that the one who brings it home would most likely be the one who becomes it's owner, so it would be better to vote option 2.
The only problem is that this tells us how Heartless gets a pet, but not what that pet actually is, which would really be a deciding factor for me. I want him to have a pet that fits him as a character, but I'm not certain what that would be. A raven? A wolf? A vampire bat? I don't know who finds what, so I guess I'm still just a bit reluctant to throw my vote in for either one.
Sorry if I'm being a bit harsh/over-analytical about all this, but at least I'm trying to be constructive about it rather than flinging insults... (thinks back over the last couple comments) ...non-comedic, mean spirited ones anyways.
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I forgive you man, you opened my eyes and I had to thank ya for that.
I’m gonna go with 2.