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this is a very good story, far better than most peoples second stories.
as for the grammar, it is of decent quality so don't worry about it to much.
7437121 Thank you.
Why is he ever at a disadvantage even in a storm? It cancels his fire but he can still use cytokenises and control lightning.
Really, please get a editor for this.
This looks interesting but the grammar is butchering a lot of the potential it has...
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Training. He has the ability to. Doesn't mean he knows how to.
Welllll. Ermmm *tugs collar* about that...