The mercenary life is a tough one. Traveling from town to town, taking different jobs, and working for many clients. There's also not a lot of mercenary groups in the peaceful land of Equestria. So, what does young Jade Caliber with all of her guard training do? Form her own party to earn some extra cash! (Of course!)
Belonging to no specific employer, she and her group travel all over Equestria taking various jobs and get into all sorts of strange situations. Jade and her rat-tag team of troops face many challenges on their adventures, such as monsters, snobbish nobles, harsh environments, cursed items, and each other. Jade will stop at nothing to complete her life-long quest: to do whatever the hay she wants before her time is up!
Rated T for language, sexual themes, and gore. May add more character tags later.
This fic takes place between "Spice Up Your Life" and "Stranger than Fan-Fiction."
Thanks to all the members for their awesome OCs, and thanks to TP Night for helping out with this fic.
Also, made the "popular stories" list 8/5/16! Thanks to everyone who is loving this fic so far.
If these OCs were voiced, what would they sound like?
7453431 Eclsipe would be monotone, can't say for the others.
By the way, you got Eclipse's fur color wrong -_-.
Enjoyed the chapter so far man!
To be honest, I'd be surprised if you had brought Moth up in this chapter since her personality is well, y'know...
Anyways, I look forward to reading the rest of this promising story!
7453495 What do you mean? Did you change her personality recently? Also thanks.
7453500 No, I just mean that she'd be a little quieter than the others and try to 'fade' into the shadows when that meeting took place.
7453507 Well I never did specify who was at the meeting, just the amount of members present. So it's hinted that she was there at some point.
7453509 Exactly. First impressions are usually shaky with Moth.
7453517 Not like Eclipse did any better :p
7453524 Haha!
Nice chapter! And I like how you portrayed Stardusts character, I'm also glad that you used her orb, seems like somethings gonna happen!
7453580 I hoped I got her personality and abilities down correctly.
Nice start. I love the way you wrote Abyssal, its spot on to the way he whould act.
Pretty good so far!
7453584 yep, she doesn't seem too quiet, and she's pretty honest about her opinions, you did a great job!
um, I haven't exactly read the chapter yet. Is my oc used? Just wanted to know.
I don't really think the 'the' is needed here.
Great story regardless. Seems like an oddly cheery bunch of merchs, though it seems to work for them. Nice job on Atlas, not quite how I imagined her, but I rather like this one. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Yeah Vladrö is in!
7454431 Who is your OC?
7454987 Name: Natural Note
Gender: Female
Race: Unicorn
Coat Color: Cyan, fades into green at the hooves
Cutie Mark: microphone with three sixteenth notes around it
Mane and Tail: brown, with two yellow highlights
7455208 I don't think so sorry. Maybe later on, im not sure.
7455235 okay...
Hmm looking forward to more
7453431 Guesclin would be gruff and belittling. Charles Dance would voice him
7453431 Dead Eye is would be a little gruff and gritty.
7455819 Really? I kind of imagined Dead Eye to sound little young yet deadly. Like the voice of either Brian Beacock or Todd Haberkorn. But that's just my opinion. Other than that, what did you think of the fic so far? Did I get some of Dead Eye's personality right?
7455974 I like it so far and yeah you did get some of his personality right. I just didn't expect him to be going at with December right then and there but it's cool, and your idea for his voice is a little better I kinda forgot he was 20.
you know I'm just excited to see when the two nooby's start getting to know this crazy group of merc's because that's going to be fun.
7456985 I'm excited too. Trust me when I say that there will be a lot of interesting interactions/conversations between them, their leader, and all of the members.
7457032 if you ever need help with seen Dead Eyes in just ask.
7457109 Will do.
7457032 I greatly look forward to seeing it
7453985 also, I really like the way you used the orb, seems like it might be an important part of the story, I don't know but I liked how Jade was kinda doubting herself about it!
7462270 Glad you're liking it. I hope I described how she used her orb correctly.
7462402 yep, u did it perfectly!
Jade isn't very smart is she...
Ooh I liked it
, I'm starting to guess what Stardusts gonna do
, anyway I died when Shield was looking at Stardust
,this was amazing!
Haha
I'm ready for a Scooby-Doo chase scene!
And to be serious, I'mma thinking one of those bad outcomes is gonna happen with the way this is going down.
I like it!
Methinks love is on the horizon
Well done on Guesclin by the way
Good chapter, I rather liked it, even though it was exactly 'action packed' as you put it. Not everything has to have Micheal Bay levels of action after all. And you're starting school soon too, huh? I wish you luck with that, don't worry too much about the next chapter. Anyways, have a nice day. Until next time,
-Sphinx
7486838 when's the next chapter coming out? (I'm guessing you were knowing that someone was gonna ask this) I'm not demanding chapters and hounding you for more, I'm just curious! Take as long as you need, I just can't wait to see what will happen to shield!
7660041 Sorry. It's taking longer than expected cuz I'm really busy with classes. The next chapter will happen eventually.
7660056 Classes are that bad huh?
7660056 take your time! I know how school can get!
7660083 It's not that their bad, it's just they give me a lot of work to do and less time to concentrate on personal projects such as this one.
7660101 Thanks.
7660148 Don't worry man, it's the same for me.
Finally. It's understandable man, but I want more :(. If I can help let me know
Excellent. Loved it. Can't wait for more
So, are you going to be adding OCs to this, or what?
7753340 Well, there are already OCs in this story. So I'm a little confused on what your asking. Like add more OCs later ?