There is no ignorance; there is knowledge.
There is no fear; there is power.
I am the heart of the Force.
I am the revealing fire of light.
I am the mystery of darkness
In balance with chaos and harmony,
Immortal in the Force.
This is the Oath the Code of the Je'daii. This is what I believe this is what I will teach Equestria.
My name is Grand Master Socrates meaning knowledge and wisdom well it is now.You see I was just some ordinary guy that went to a con dressed as a force Wielder. Something happened now I am in Equestria but this is not the Equestria I know for the inhabitants are not ponies or anthro they are human.
Now that I am here I have all the knowledge and power of a Je'daii Master and I intend to teach the force sensitive of this world the ways of the Je'daii. But first I must find those who could help me, unfortunately, two of them happen to be named Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie.
Please tell me why these two have to be force sensitive.
(Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Chrysalis are simi major characters they will appear in the story every now and then one at a time or all together, Zacora will also show up every now and again.)
Not bad, though it has some minor errors, but it's good.
Thanks came up with story after watching the force awakens. Could you guess who the red and blue orbs were if I had to ask.
7683959 Hm if I were to guess, the blue orb is the Jedi and the red orb is the Sith. Both of them look like they are ancient force ghost users to me. It's hard to tell of who these people in the orbs are, but I'm thinking that maybe something must've happen to them.
Correct the red orb is the first sith lord Ajunta Pall and the blue orb is the youngest jedi grand master Satele Shan if you want to know more about them they have a wiki page for each and I will be using them in the story also
Friggin awesome, love star wars. LET'S DO DIS!!
Who keeps disliking the comments, and why?
You're misspelling Jedi on purpose, right?
7860702 he's not incorrectly spelling Jedi, the Je'daii Order was an ancient organization unified by its belief and observance of the Force on the planet Tython, in the galaxy's Deep Core. he's using the order as the, story Focus, for this work.
Awesome job on the story man, just a few nitpicky things about grammar though. It is mostly just misspellings such as "You are quit welcome after all it is part of the Je'daii code to protect the innocent." I believe you meant to put "quite". I read it over fairly quickly and besides that noticed you used the word "witch" instead of "which" but alas excellent chapter my fine tombstoney friend.
Also forgot to cast a vote, fluttershy would probably be the best motherly material for an abused kid like pip so let's go with that.
7862242 he is correct about the Je'daii but there are quite a few other misspellings and such in the chapter. Also commas man, they save lives.
BOW CHICKA WOW WOW!!!!
LUNA!!!!!! I VOTE LUNA!!!
(this is my reaction to that answer ^)
more I need more
it is pronounced jedi not je'daii (love the story tho still)
8158279 No the Je'daii order predates the Jedi or Sith.
7813046 idk but its annoying
this is from the book "The Path Of The Jedi" camo.derpicdn.net/94a56fa6661c448485a9e6f1c872fef5b1fcb44b?url=http%3A%2F%2Fvignette3.wikia.nocookie.net%2Fstarwars%2Fimages%2Fc%2Fc8%2FInitiate_dress-TPJ.png%2Frevision%2Flatest%3Fcb%3D20130528140045
8158367 i've been confused then.... plz tell me when i get new chapter or will it be.... ded
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8158521 New chapter should be out by Monday at the latest.
8158533 yay
FINNALY AN UPDATE!
can't wait to find out who the shadow figure is ( Dark Jedi? )
I honestly thought that you misspelled jedi
8163685 No problem I get that a lot you just got to remember that the Je'Daii came first then the Jedi and Sith.
*sees update* GSDHGOAHGASHGSDHGSHGKJCXHIUGFHSAPDGHDSIUGFUISDAHG *HAS A SEIZURE*
8163685 I did as well
This is just my opinion but I think there should be less "mating" between Socrates and the ponies and also less talk about how attractive Socrates thinks certain ponies are
8163685 UM NO the Je'daii order and jedi order are two different orders BAKA
THIS IS JE'DAII ORDER BAKA NOT JEDI ORDER BAKA BAKA
8158279 ...... THIS IS NOT THE BLOODY JEDI ORDER YOU STAR WARS NEWBIE (NOT ME IT'S MY TWIN BROTHER SAYING TO YOU)
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Je'daii_Order
yea I pretty much see the reason why blueballs can't have those blue prints
and also Socrates's lost his V card so I'll be taking that
8158496 IKR
8172274 When I found out they were different I posted that comment and such your comment is unneeded. But please keep in mind I am not a starwars nerd so I didn't know beforehand
8172275 I am not a star wars noon but there was never a cannon reference to the je'daii and your brother needs to take a closer look at my profile pic
8158908 hey cape wanna go beat up blueballs even more then he is already
I got my metal bat and my Butt Punchers Brand gloves by kagatothefinalboss
8172733 I got the crotch rocket with the nut busters
I like this story so far but I would have liked more if the ponies were anthropomorphic
Are they really lacking that much of males?
I'm thinking Cadence because she the more likely mother one.
Ouch.
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when is the next chapter will be coming out?
Youch... looks like a certain hater and his friends attacked your fanfic. I can tell by the random thumbs down in the comment section.
You going to send out any updates soon
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I got meh kagatothefinalboss brand butt punching spiked knuckles 
hey alpha wanna go beat the crap out of blue balls even more then he already is