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sejox

sejox #1 · May 23rd, 2017 · 5 · ·

she opened the door to reveal a small room with a queen sized bed in the middle of it

I don't know why but I just imagined a tiny room in which the bed barely fit

Slash17

Slash17 #2 · May 23rd, 2017 · 3 · ·

Hey guys hope you like this, I may write a sequel if I get enough feed back on it , the sequel will involving the cmc and the rest of the mane 6

Till then, later.

OmniFox

OmniFox #3 · May 23rd, 2017 · 1 · ·

8183566 Ever done one about Spike starting a secret relationship with Cheerilee?

Dusk Melody

Dusk Melody #4 · May 23rd, 2017 · 3 · 3 ·

Many basic grammar and punctuation errors earn you a dislike

Frankie2

Frankie2 #5 · May 23rd, 2017 · 3 · ·

“Good night Spike, get your rest, you’ll need it……,”

Good news: I like the concept of this story. Sexy times with her teacher (maybe teachers in the future). And I am interested in reading more on this, especially that last line. However...
Bad news: Forgotten quotation marks, incorrect capitalization, missing words, need I go on. If you do decide to continue this, do yourself a favor and get an editor and/or proofreader.

He23t

He23t #6 · May 24th, 2017 · · ·

Hope for the sequel!

Foxhelm

Foxhelm #7 · May 24th, 2017 · · ·

“I’ll need you to come by class later,.”

Office, you mean office, college professors have offices.

Foxhelm

Foxhelm #8 · May 24th, 2017 · · ·

“Oh Spike nothing wrong with that, your 18 years old, and nobody needs to know about this, it.,”

... the person preparing the birth certificate of the child might... especially when

"“Please give me your cum!”

... you're a college level science teacher, Twilight, one would think you'd have a better understanding of biology than most people.

closet brony 77

closet brony 77 #9 · May 27th, 2017 · 3 · ·

“Alright Spike,” she said with a smile, suddenly her smile turned devious as she remembered that even if their first night together was over, there were still a few other teachers she knew who wanted a piece of Spike for themselves and she wasn’t going to be selfish.

YES! IT'S GONNA BE A HAREM STORY!!!

aaaaaaaabruh