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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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No to be nit-picky, but...

“It's sort of our bed and butter here in the land of Equestria."

You mean, “bread and butter”?

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whoops XD, okay, I’ll fix that

Well, Molestia finally finds a man that can satisfy her.

Wow didn’t saw that coming…wait is that mean that is technically 2 mares in this story? Ja the fun has just double

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If you mean Molestia, then yes. But if you meant Luna, her story hasn’t been written yet, but I will make sure she gets just as lucky as Celestia did, if not, luckier.

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Kind of asking for both, I don’t think Molestia has exactly a ‘line’ that would not cross, but if Luna arrive those that mean Nightmare funky time…oh right that persona doesn’t exist that was only Luna self hatred taking form…never mind

Ok dude this is WAY to rushed he arrives In equestria and they literally explain to him everything right away? Please man you gotta work on that.

JDH

helped sell Zat apple jam.

Don't you mean Zap-apple jam?

JDH

So on the first of each month, Princess would send you to your hometown,.

Which princess?

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thanks for pointing it out. You've got sharp eyes

“Oh, sweet Celestia, praise the sun butt!” you say, fully aroused.

This is gold. Congratulations.

“Well then.” Celestia grabs you by the shoulders and lays you down on the bed while she got up and took a few steps away and started...laughing? “Well then, I think it’s time we take it up a notch.” As she said that, her beautiful rainbow colored hair changed into a faded pink color.

She laughed in a way that kinda scared you. But even moreso when she turned around and gave you the scariest, yet, sexiest rape face you’ve ever seen.

“Princess Celestia? What did you do?” you asked, all shocked.

“Oh, I just gave myself a little makeover. But right now, you’re about to feel a whole night of pleasure from the one and only Princess “Molestia.” she said, seductively, walking towards you.

RED spy: YOU IMBECILE, you doomed us all!!!!:pinkiegasp:
RED endgenere: ahhhhh:fluttershbad:
RED heavy: oh this is bad:twilightoops:
RED scout: oh c**p:rainbowderp:

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she was talking about back in the day BEFORE Filthy Rich.

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My dude, I feel you. The way this story plays out aggravates me too. But we're just here to jack off. It sets up how we got human dick goin into pony puss along with a bit of feels to put behind the bangin. That's all it needed to do. It didn't exactly do it well, but that's not why we're here now is it? This is basically porn.

does the viewer really care about how invested the husband is in his analytics job and how he's never around and how the wife is just ohso lonely and needs somebody to keep her company and calls up the pool guy who is also a really close family friend and how this might affect their relationship and blah blah blah? No, as long as the clop part of the clopfic is good (it is pretty good, I enjoyed it nice work), the story setting up reason why the sexy bits are happening is secondary.

*Sniff* can someone give Lilac a tissue..?

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*gives you a tissue* here you go

Just give me a minute _wipes eyes_

I love the work you have done with rewriting the stories man. They are awesome

Would it be possible to get a link to the cover art of this story?

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I think NineTailBeastBall might still have it. He showed it me via phone

I checked the main screen and I'm surprised to see my Princess Celestia story in the featured section

you never cease to surprise me keep up the good work love this story

Comment posted by THE SPIRIT OF DEATH deleted Dec 21st, 2018

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Can you give me the link to the image of this story please?

By the way I LOVED this story:heart:

As always an amazing job.

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What is the original link to the image of the story?

Comment posted by NineTailBeastBall deleted Oct 26th, 2019

Heh, the good ol "forgot the soundproofing":rainbowlaugh:

This story warms my heart up this is really good thanks Israel

Wow...right in the feels

I kinda wish we could still read the old versions of these stories, I actually really liked them

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He's just explaining why and how he wanted to design Platinum the way we did

SUBSCRIBE TO PEWDIEPIE

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found it y'all, it's post 1543845 in derpibooru

Comment posted by Soltero deleted Feb 16th, 2020

Does anyone know a way I can find the old version of the story? I really wanna read it again

Man, the last part really touched me..

I did NOT see the change to Daybreaker coming in the last chapter, and the whole immortal thing at the end was also kinda surprising. But this was a really well-written story, and I loved the way you built up the romance between Platinum and Celestia. Kudos to you, and HUZZAH on another great story.

Hey Yabuki, where's Fluttershy and her baby since you didn't put it there and when did her son was born.

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I think her son stayed back at Ponyville at her cottage with her husband.

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And you didn’t add the part about Fluttershy is about to give birth to Warm Breeze.

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