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When a story’s description has a dozen problems, you know it’s gonna be good.
You are anon, or as everyone in the grand city of ponyville calls you, 'uncle '. No, no, you are not blood related to any of them, it’s just that you've been around so long that every pony has taken to thinking of you as family. And it only took around 50 years.
Oh yeah, did I forget that you’re immortal.?
And plausiblypossibly a sociopath.? Oh, don't worry you're not the only one, behind the scenes even sun butt’s been up to some twisted shit for her own amusement.
Maybe insanity just came with immortality?.
Either way, long story short, you’re locked in a game of 4four-dimensional chess with a mad mare who played the game a million times. One slip up, and you can kiss your dreams of conquering it all goodbye.
No pressure.
ftfy
minus the typos and grammar errors. i am really liking this concept
Oh now this looks good very unique and original a battle of the minds between two immortals a human trying too build his own nation/empire with his own city of brainwashed citizens who think his the most loving caring kind “uncle” ever and now Celestia is on to him and seems pretty smug about it to well can’t wait to see what happens next keep it up btw i’m rooting for the human.
Considering Celestia calls Spike a pet, I think it is safe to assume that she really is a bitch like our human protagonist exclaims.
Good to see my story is at the very least original.
Typed it up at night so I'm kinda embarrassed at the grammar now that I'm rested
Hello bread
imtoad
What knetch said. This is way more interesting than I first thought it would be, I especially like the chicken blood trick, and even though you could definitely use a proofreader I got sucked in nonetheless. Way to go
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It's a very good story; I loved it. Not to be rude, but the typos were hilarious!
Discission
noun, Ophthalmology.
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an incision of the lens of the eye, as for removal of cataract.
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long live the princess
Question: Will this story be told from Anon's POV only or are you planning on shifting POVs as you go on?
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I will definitely at some point letting the other characters have their moment's but for now fleshing out Anon and how his 50 year's in ponyvile and 70+ year's in equestria as a whole has shaped the world.
Small spoiler.
The world as it is now is from pop culture to modern slang and idea's are heavily influnced by celestia who had over a thousand years to do so and unknowingly Anon.
Truth is up till he came around every pony had more of a early 1900's western accent similar to the average Apple's family member.
His mannerisms just seemed to catch on after a few decades.
I just want to say off first I love the story I love the idea concept and looking forward to any more chapters to come out about it
lol. well this is going to be with how he is going to subvert and mess with Twilight
Ho--Lee-- duck. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Makes sense that he had some influence on their culture, however minuscule compared to Celestia's.
Well, I'm glad that this story is back and is as funny as last time. But, it seems a bit rushed with quite a bit of spelling mistakes. It didn't mess too much with the enjoyable chapter though. Keep up the great work.
I can say one thing... Worth the wait! Awesome!
I'm wondering why he just doesn't explain to them that this is his room and they need to sleep on the couch (in case he has no guestroom.) I mean, Twilight and Spike have some manners, right?
I am surprised. Why doesn't he put twilight in her place. Everything she is doing is beyond rude. I almost cant read this chapter I want to smack twilight so hard. That's his room and yet she has the audacity to do that? if "Uncle" continues to let Twilight do this i may just have to stop reading because Im just getting annoyed at twilight now.
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Uncle doesn't want to let anyone see passed him masked as a loving caring person so in order to keep up the persona he can't instantly shout them out or present himself as too negative.
Twilight wasn't trying to be rude by the way, she just ran with what she thought was okay at the time, think back to season 1 twilight, that version of her had next to no social skills what so ever and as such barely understands the concept of personal space or off limits.
She just went with the logical choice and picked the room with the most space to accommodate both her and spike.
As far as she knew "uncles" species, was just a form of hyper evolved monkey that only recently learned to sleep indoors.
Poor horse doesn't know any better
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Wouldn't it help "uncle's" persona if he sat her down and taught her those boundaries though? I would think the first lesion in friendship is to understand the that there may be things that are considered rude and potentially anger a friend? And after that it would make things that much simpler to manipulate her. That is if that is what you are trying to go after. If he can convert her to his side it would make his game that much easier to play against Celestia. It reminds me of countries putting puppet leaders in other countries to control said country. Same concept applies me thinks.
I consider this guy better than me, considering that in his place I would wring her neck for violating my boundaries. I wouldn't care if she had no social skills whatsoever, there are things that need to be respected!
*Checks the pulse* I'm sad to say this story is dead.
Wow, this is really good. I can't wait for another cha-
Last updated in 2017
Well... another good story bites the dust.
Please be more it started getting good