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The two stories were adorable
I kind of wish Pinkie told a story, but that's really my only complaint.
This was fun to read, I like how they all reacted like nothing was odd when she told them
you forgot to add the EQ tag
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EGG? These are them as ponies. Unless you mean AU, which is even less likely. Not every human story is an EQG, bud
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Is it ponies or is it anthro? back to topic on the review... It's alright you just a few things for grammar such as
He was pounding away at his sister at this point, and he could tell she was about to cum to.
well this is what it's post to be
He was pounding away at his sister at this point, and he could tell she was about to cum too.
(too, to, two) will destroy some fictions if it's not word correctly but, however there needs to be more commas ( , ) in some parts of the story that needs it.
i'm well this is a weird way but, I is always capitalize not sure why but, I wouldn't worry on that.
Now time for the character developments
>> So much scripts and not enough motion during their conversation. <<
Example... Flora looks at wildprince15, "Hmm... so is rainbow scratching her head with left hoof as it's getting dark outside." as she is getting confused on this story when shes reading in the morning as the sun is rising.
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It's ponies and sadly I didn't understand that last part and now I'm confused
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Well you have anthro picutre as a book cover and not ponies so I thought this was anthro.
One last thing.
None more so than Rarinbow Dash, who spoke up next.
You spelled rainbow dash name wrong.
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what i ment was that in the last story they where human and now there pony, what happened?
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I got in a spot of trouble before I could properly send this out. Had to change somethings
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If they are horses, why wear clothes?
8370126 XD
The eternal question.
WHERE IS SPIKE!?
WHERE IS SPIKE!?
I would love to read an eleven pony orgy.
nice work.
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Thanks!