Wandering Sunrise remembers Equestria as it once was: a land of harmony, broken by strife. She was sealed in a Stable-Tec stasis pod the day the Megaspells hit... and she wakes up in a pool of water, surrounded by strangers.
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See it From the bright side, Sunrise. You still have one good Eye. And have it Better than Blackjack.
May i throw a Joke in? Only Thing she needs Now, is a cardboard box. Get it?
From this point forward you write ' shed' instead of 'sled'....I would look through all the text after Sunrise and Nyota have their last bout of fun. Just saying...not trying to spoiler anything.
Finally done...nothing more to report. Except for the spellcheck bopping you again...this was coherent clean work. Even with all the twists and turns and varied emotions, this is a fun read! See you in the next chapter!
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Fixed
And here we go. Sunrise and gang are finly back out in the wasteland. Looking good fi you and your editor and proofreaders are catching a lot more of the typos now. Also reminder to anyone Fiaura is looking for a new artist.
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Looking forward to it. Starting it in a bit.surprised at the ending of chapter 43.
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*notices you comments on 45 is scared now*
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Sorry, I am an avid reader, especially when I am enjoying a good story.
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Okay well... *waits for your opinion on 44*
Ok, this chapter cost me sleep. I refused to go to bed without finishing it, it was that good following on the heels of chapter 44. I admit it, I am that hooked by the story overall.
I am starting to wonder if there is more than just friendship between Scopola Mina and Sunrise, Perhaps they were friends before or whatnot, but is interesting. I also love that Sunrise has taught the aliens not only how to hug, but gotten the T’ doshians where they initiate them.
I get a kick out of how before the T’ doshians complained that Hollow treated them almost like pets, but now Mountain seems to treat Nyota almost the same way, without realizing it, through exhibitions such as patting him on the head. That was very well done to me.
I am also amused at the idea of Quick Stitch being a MILF. It would explain Scouploa and the others not being interested in more than friendship with him I guess. It was good to see how excited he seemed to become about being a "parent" too. However, part of me wonders if there may be more to it.
I will also have to say I never expected the power source for the stable and forges. That caught me off guard entirely. But a wonderful concept, and a real danger if not handled properly.
Finally, the shots that Sunrise has to get. Ouch, I can almost feel them, and I can even understand her sentiments about it. However, at least she has that treatment available. Almost forgot, OK, who stole the tank? I did not see that coming at all, now I can not wait to read the next chapter.
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*evil Fiaura is evil*
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Pink's avoidance is coming through loud and clear. I can see some things coming up that could be very rough. I am really looking forward to reading it when it comes though. Sometimes a story has to have some pain to tell a good tale.
Keep up the good work!
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Waiting on Editor for 46.
I may be mistaken, but was this and the following conversation not already in a previous chapter?
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New editor who didn't have the continuity yet. Fixed or should be now.
Now that is a very small drop... in a very, VERY large bucket of drugs.
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Yes it was.
Ok chapter
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That is genuinely the most surprising comment you've ever given.