Two years after the fall of the Storm King. Many kingdoms regain their freedom from him.
The Princesses of Equestria worked for those two years in an attempt to seize peace all over the world. Many species came to light as they slowly began to grow again.
But... In the ceremony that was going to bring the world together with an agreement. Twilight was killed.
Many years later, she awake in the mind of a another pony.
But the world seems different. Peace was achieved after all, the world united. Twilight succeed.
Did she?
Once again thanks to sejox for the edit and all the help. I'm afraid I can't give you enough credit, my friend.
The cover is from cmaggot on Deviant Art.
Chapters (6)
The story is good so far keep up the good work.
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Thanks, I'll try
You caught my attention. There were some grammatical errors, but I still understood it well.
Don't ruin it from here.
Just messing, you're doing well. I'm gonna keep a close eye on this story. I think it may have Top 10 Fanfiction stories potential.
I love your story. I hope you will continue it, there is a lot of stories that have been cancelled after first chapter. I gave you like, I added story to my favourites and I'm tracking it's progress. Take good care of yourself and don't worry I will wait for next chapter patiently. Bye.
P.S. I just found Rainbow Dash in FimFiction settings and i think she's so cute.
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*Some time later*
Top 10 Fanfiction with Wasted Potential
I'll do my best
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Canceled, never.
Slow... Probably...
Worthy?... I hope so
And indeed. The Lil Rainbow Dash is very cute. She kill me every time she fall asleep.
Thank you both for your comments. Seriously
There are some issues with grammer but that can be fixed rather easily with an editor. Not bad.
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Guess I'll need to look for another editor beside sejox hehe.
Thank you
Interesting story thus far. I wonder how long it'll take her to realize who Twilight is? Also I wonder how far in the future Twilight woke up into... Emerald's thoughts "Did she say… Celestia?" make me suspicious of whether Celestia is even still alive or not. Of course, that could just be me being paranoid.
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The answer of the first question is in Ch2. The answer for the second is in Ch3. And the Answer of the last one... Well, that's a tricky one, hehe. No spoilers.
Hrm, a "stuck in another's head" story. I do hope this one will be finished.
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It will, in time, if I don't die or anything like that. And... Well... The story will take another path that isn't about Twilight being in another head, hehe. Hopefully you all will like it
Hmm... I haven't seen anything like this before.
I'll read this one too, as in, you're in mah tracking
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Thank you so much <3
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Hehe, THANK YOU!
Actually, chapter four is already done, my editor is having personal issues so I'm just waiting for him.
So, everything is going well so far
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Huh neat
Crazy story so far, love it. 😄
In mine, Twilight dies....or does she? 😉 😄 No but really, she dies but Celestia saves her, and Twi comes back, so yeah, weird XD
Your story is better though. 😊
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Oh, a life for a life? That could be interesting.
And thank you
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Well, it's kinda similar to Dumbeldore helping Harry after Voldemort supposedly kills him, or when Master Oogway from Kung Fu Panda 3 tells Po that he can resurrect himself, these are where I got inspiration from to make Twilight die, but come back to life with Celestia's help in the afterlife. 😄 Still weird in my opinion lol XD
And you're welcome. 😊
good story good chapter I guess it been like 100 or so years, and find out there two type of alicorn natural born one, who are ageless those who do stuff become alicorn just die and get reincarnated and slow take over they new bodys.
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Or there is just one type and all ageless.
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Those errors are mostly if not exclusively on the prologue. I wrote that part without an editor and many months ago and sadly I haven't give it the attention it deserves. Thank you for remind me that.
I invite you to read Chapter 1, since it was greatly improved and since the prologue is completely optional. The only thing you need to know about it is already on the description.
Tracking beacon activated. Let's see where this one goes.
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Yay. Thank you. Chapter 3 will be up as soon as one of the editors find time on their schedules
There's a few "name's verb_plural" where it should be "name verb_singular", among other language derps.
Looking forward to the next chapters, though.
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hum, I'll have to check it again then, thanks for the heads up
I think you mean her in place of his
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Indeed. I'm sorry... I have some kind of issue with the his/her and all that... God... I really sorry.
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its alright everyone makes mistakes
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I make them too often, hehe. I apologize and am glad to know you guys tell me when I forget one of those. Thanks.
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welcome
S.M.I.L.E.
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found anotherone
Need new chapter....NOW!
what is going on I need more
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Everything is in hands of the editors, hehe.
Wow, so far I am loving this story. Keep up the great work and I eagerly await the next chapter!
👍 
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Thanks, I'm still working on chapter 4 edition aside of my other projects and fanfics, hehe.
Thanks again
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You're welcome!
Oh wow I found this story again. I remember asking for it on Discord, but nobody knew, and now I just happen to find it by chance as I read the summary and realize it's what I was looking for like a month ago... Lol talk about luck
EDIT: Read the two new chapters and DAMN I have to say, this is good...
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Wow, really? Actually I didn't expect that... That makes me feel sadder for not uploading Ch4 yet... Or finishing the re-edit for the prologue...
Forgive me
I'm trying to put some order on my schedules and life, also I'm trying to improve my english so chapters can be published without such hard editing but, well... I'm really sorry for the delay I'm having :'c
in all my years on this web sight i can count on my finger how many non human fanfics i enjoyed reading .
This is one of them. Thank you for writing this and i hope you have a great time writing this .
It doesn't matter if it's hard to read sometimes, this story is seriously a great read.
Onward to the Crystal Empire!!!
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Thank you! Thank you very much! I'll try my best on the following chapters ^^. There's a lot to do yet.
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I means very much to me. Thank you very much ^^. I hope you enjoy the following chapters (once I finish them, hehe)
Well things are interesting
Happy to see you here once again, lad. Hopefully I will "be back" too soon (if only i could have more time, darn it!)
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Squeeze that time! I know you can :')
And thanks. I hope this time I will be better...
Wow, another great chapter! Keep up the great work and I look forward to the NEXT one! :)
